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@kaya-young I’m by no means an expert on dialogue, buy yeah it looked good to me 🙂

@dekreel k, bye! 🙂

@supermonkey42 yeah….I might’ve fainted too 😉

@kaya-young I thought this was good; I actually really liked the second bit 🙂

@supermonkey42 I loved this! *looks in freezer for ice cream*

@kaya-young wow, really? thank you! <3 <3 <3

@dekreel yeah I use this topic whenever I read!

my WIP is going kinda slow, just cuz of school and life stuff (ugh). thanks for asking 🙂 Do you have a book you’re writing?

@dekreel I wasn’t going to set a time, unless everyone wanted to. We’d just post whenever we’d read the chapter, I guess.

@rochellaine …….well……here it is……my, uh, Octopus Ball poem. *hides face* This is the very first time I’ve written a poem. very. first. Don’t expect much. I probably broke some rules and maybe it all didn’t rhyme right either…….but…..here it is:

The Octopus Ball

A strange thing happened to me

on the 23rd of January.

I was at…[Read more]

*characters

@kaya-young A piece from your writing would be helpful. Also, I’ve found that when character’s aren’t coming across well, it’s because I don’t have a consistent mental image of them. The different mental images make them act like ten people mixed into one which ends up as chaos.

@dekreel I’ll admit it’s not as frequented as the Writers’ Corner, but I think I’ve chatted with some others reading at the same time in the past.

@dekreel Yeah, it can be kinda hard for me too for certain subjects to stick. if their in story form, then I really connect (I’m a fiction writer after all, i love stories 🙂 )

@kaya-young @dekreel @notawriter @skredder *squeals into pillow* This is pretty exciting!

*draws sword and points ahead* Tomorrow we read Ruth chapter 1, fellow readers!

@dekreel ooh……..chemistry………*pats your head sympathetically*

I’m reading a church history book for school.

@kaya-young Dekreel has good advice (and yes we’d love to see some of your dialogue! i love snippets…). I think my advice would be to observe how people talk. Observation is a great thing for writers. Just write the dialogue how people talk. Also, it might be helpful (yet I know how much some writers hate doing this) to take a piece of the…[Read more]

@dekreel oops, sorry! I’m back now. are u still here?

I’m leaving for now, might be back in about 45 minutes to an hour….

@kaya-young okay, thanks! happy writing to you! 🙂

I’m reading for school again. anyone wanna join me?

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