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@jenwriter

Oh! I write in omnipresent POV all the time. It’s really fun because I can see all the character’s thoughts and actions, and not just the MC’s.

First thing I would do is decide–why do you want to write it in Omni POV? What genre of book is it? Some genres work better with Omni POV than others. Like mystery, for example. Most mystery…[Read more]

@ariel-ashira @jenwriter17

Whasup? Anything new(well… happening?) at KP lately? Catwing fall in a jar of peanut butter and get covered in chicken feathers? Skredder howl at the moon to much? (You are the one with the wolf avatar, aren’t you Skredder? If not… )

I see out dear Rochellaine finally succumbed to her evil author nature and…[Read more]

@valtmy

Hello, dear old KP friends! I’ve missed you. Even though most of you are probably over at ST as well. Still. All our writing jokes and our beautiful anthem….

Anyhow, I’d love to read some. My Google account is under Sarah Irene, btw. Just so you don’t see some random person requesting access and have no idea who said random person is. XD

Anyone around? I just migrated from ST where no one is around really… so what’s up at KP? The deserted halls of this mountain fortress really must be brought back to life one day. I miss KP. And the KP anthem. And all the great inside jokes… *tears*

@jenwriter17

• My favorite character:

Hm… I like your MC, Rin, but I always go for the anti-hero type, so I’m going to have to say Jax. He’s well written, and has got hints for a few ghosts in his past. Not that Rin doesn’t, but I think I like Jax more because he’s a bit more levelheaded. Rin has spunk, but she jumps to conclusions(not that…[Read more]

@gh24682468999 @daughteroftheking @catwing

Thanks! I’ll definitely be taking your guy’s advice. Kirin is… weird. He’s my MC, but he’s hard for me to write because I usually write anti-hero MCs and he’s not really an anti-hero. He’s entertaining sometimes, but I’m just not quite as attached to him as my other characters. *sighs* At least I have…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Yes, I’d like to continue beta reading all the chapters you put up, if you don’t mind.

@ariella-newheart Thanks! I’ll try it out.

@ariella-newheart Thanks! Yes, they are. The middle is Smaug and Bilbo… Bilbo with a katana, anyways. (Don’t ask me. It just happened.)

I haven’t been here in a while. *scans crowd* Wow, so much new art! Awesome stuff, people.

Here’ my contribution:

~Sarah

Okay, thanks @jenwriter17 !

Ah, okay. Thanks! @skredder

@skredder Totally! Plus, I think it makes characters much more interesting when they don’t always do what’s right, or are even adverse to doing what’s right until the very end of the book. It makes me root for them more, and want them to change.

Btw, How do you put in the little line between your comment and your username? I can’t seem to figure…[Read more]

Interesting idea, @skredder. I’ll try it out. Kirin is a great guy, but I really don’t want him to have “Hero Syndrome” (As in he does everything right just because it’s right.). And I also don’t want him to be an anti-hero, because it doesn’t fit. So he needs to have enough moral strength to do the right things sometimes, but he also needs to be…[Read more]

Hey @jenwriter17, sorry to bother you again, but would you mind giving me access to all the chapters you have up so far on your book? I requested access for chapter 6 and I’ve read chapter 1, but I can’t see the other ones(forgive me if it’s just something I’m overlooking in Docs, I don’t use them very often, xD). Anyway, happy writing! 🙂

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Ah, I know I just did this, at least last time anyone was on this topic, but talking about my character’s most embarrassing moment was to good to pass up, @daughteroftheking, thanks for just an awesome question. Okay. Here we go.

Kirin: Kirin would rather talk about it, because every time he gets embarrassed it seems to be in front of a bunch of…[Read more]

Hey there @jenwriter! I read your first chapter, and I really enjoyed it. And I think I just sent a request to access the rest of the chapters… I’m not sure though. My google account doesn’t like me sometimes. 🙂

Anyways, I really liked the first chapter, and I’ve got a few thoughts if you don’t mind me sharing them.

First, I really liked how…[Read more]

Ah, thanks @daughteroftheking ! *takes pizza* Yes, Vyrn and her pals are all very interesting people to me. My favorite character so far(yes, I have favorites) is Jax. He’s fun to write because he’s really good at fighting and such things, but if you ask him to socialize, he’s easily the most awkward person you’ll ever see.

Hm… Kirin would…[Read more]