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@jenwriter17  I’m the same way XD

Is this… the first time that a Readers’ Corner meeting actually worked?

@jenwriter17  So… What time will the discussion be? Is there going to be a set time?

@jenwriter17  Ahhh, church history… That stuff doesn’t stick to my brain. I don’t know about you XD *pats head (mane?) back*

@jenwriter17  Yep! Trying to make sense of this chemistry book… *squints at periodic table*

@ariella-newheart  I mean aren’t there some… undignified parts?

@kaya-young  It depends on what your dialogue looks like. If you post a piece here or something, I’d be more than happy to give you some pointers 🙂

Overall, my best piece of advice is to make sure that your characters’ vocab isn’t far-fetched. Especially if your story is contemporary or futuristic. For example, this sentence, “Can we progress…[Read more]

@jenwriter17  I’d like to try! I might be busy though

@jenwriter17  WAIT! I’M HERE! *groans*

Anyway, I’m here, reading for school, too

@jenwriter17 I was actually about to say the same thing. 😀  So goodbye, and we leave an empty Writers’ Corner for someone to fill.

@seekjustice Okay, bye!  will you be on again at three or four pm your time like you usually are?

@ingridrd Oh, byeeee!  See you later!

@ingridrd Okay, all good!  Haha!  So I guess if I ever do write a poem that I post on the forum for critique you want to be tagged…

But right now everything I’m working on is prose. 😀

Now that I’m finished with my poem I’m going back to my his-fic short story.  How’s your brainstorming coming along?

@rochellaine @jenwriter17  Welp, I gotta head out.  Happy writing!  🙂

@jenwriter17 The Cat in the Hat is amazing.  He can do so many things, can’t he?  Except, of course, control Things One and Two…

Yes!  That is exactly what I meant.  A ball attended by octopi.  Have fun storming the brain!  (You think it’ll work?)

You get ten more points if you can recognize and answer my quote with the last line of it. 😀

@rochellaine  Oh no you’re good!  I didn’t realize you were tagging people in the Comic Poem Tag topic…I thought you were just working on a poem to post on the forum to be critiqued or whatever.  *sighs*  My brain sometimes.  🙂

@ingridrd Um…I already tagged two people, but if you go over to the topic and ask to be tagged the next person to write a poem will tag you.

Sorry I missed you! 🙁

@jenwriter17 Sounds great!  I think this is going to be fun and interesting.

@rochellaine  Oh, oh!  Me too!!!!  *jumps up and down*

@jenwriter17 You have been tagged!  Congratulations, and good luck, because you’ll probably need it… 🙂

@sam-kowal Here’s the Blue Hair poem you asked for…

(I really hope you’ve read The Cat in The Hat because if you haven’t this will not make any sense!)

Thing One’s Lament

Oh, what a tragedy it is
To have brown hair,
When all the time you know it should
Be blue that’s there!
My hair was once a lovely shade
Of bright, bright blue
But now it’s…[Read more]