Hannah

Here’s a collage for the first short story I did.
@catwing @dragon-snapper @emily @shannon

@daeus Okay *looks over the top of my glasses* 😉

First I would re-word the first sentence, it doesn’t seem to flow and seems forced. It just doesn’t sound right. Kate’s example is much easier to read.
I also agree with Kate about the part about Jerold (which how dare you make a lesser character so intriguing. Really I wanna know more about him.…[Read more]

@daeus I’ll try here I need to read over it with a piece of paper to make notes with so give me a few, but one thing I did notice….. 😛 😉

It is a book for the week

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@aratrea heheeee

@the-real-kapeefer …….. haha not sure if I’m supposed to believe that…. this is dangerous at least in videos we know your fooling around.

@xonos-darkgrate yes will do! I have a friend who’s a missionary to a french/ tribal speaking country, and she’s told me bout how hard learning a new language can be sometimes.

@dragon-snapper I like how you used to narnia actors *happy sigh* they my favorites!!

@emily oooh your light house story… right??? I like it! 😀

Yes exactly perfectly balanced, entertaining yet educational. I like it! @xonos-darkgrate 😀

@dragon-snapper ooooh I really like your Theron collage!
@aislinn-mollisong oooh I likey
@kate-flournoy Ahhh!!! beautiful
@ingridrd lovely!!! Man how did you overlay that so perfectly!!???
*goes off to make a new collage*
Every time I see these I get all these writing inspirations…

@xonos-darkgrate yeah I know what you mean. 🙂 I didn’t think you’d do something like that, I just wanted to drop that by since some authors go way over board. And when that happens it isn’t very enjoyable.

@shannon Thank you!

@xonos-darkgrate okay I see. That sounds like a lot of fun! I’m afraid I don’t have much advice other than be careful when filling in the blanks. It would be easy to make it unrealistic, or really unbelievable. 🙂 That sounds lame but that’s all I can think of. 😉

@cloudy 🙂 Your welcome!!!
haha it’s my middle name, birth year then and abbreviated writing for God 😉

@xonos-darkgrate first off wow! That sounds like a interesting undertaking! I’ve never heard of John Huss before. I think you have a really neat idea. So I do have a question, are you writing non-fiction or fiction mixed with non-fiction?

welcome @kballen (btw I typed up a really long welcome yesterday then I lost wifi signal and lost all of it…. 🙁 )
Anyways welcome to the realm! I’m sure you’ve been bombarded with writing and reading questions so here’s a shake up: do you like country or the city better? Which country are you from??
Welcome again to KP!!! 😀 😀