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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@winter-rose Welcome!
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Snapper replied to the topic Spring Writing/Reading Goals in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@daeus @graciegirl @ethryndal @kate-flournoy @that_writer_girl_99 @winter-rose @jess @all of you
Yes! I finished editing the first draft of my book!!!!!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 I am editing.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@jess Hey, that’s pretty good!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@jess That does tend to be a big part of writing. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@ethryndal Hello!
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@ethryndal Ah! That is so funny!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@graciegirl @that_writer_girl_99 @daeus @kate-flournoy @delightinlife @ethryndal @winter-rose @anyoneelse I’ll be editing for a while.
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Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 What you don’t know is that they are actually all mine.
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Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@alia ….. Ah, well, if you’re sharing fingernails, then we’re good. 😛
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Cloudy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99, I like what you have so far. Honestly, to me, it sounds like a (long) short story or a novella/novelette. I can see what people are saying about cliches and things, and you have to be careful, but from what I’ve read, so far it seems pretty original. 🙂 I would add, you and @Jess have a habit of saying do not instead od…[Read more]
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Cloudy replied to the topic Short Story Critique in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@daeus, thank you ever so much! Your critique will be carefully considered. 🙂
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Cloudy posted an update 9 years, 4 months ago
I’m working on my novelette again! I’m so excited I think my rough draft is turning out well. 🙂
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Cloudy replied to the topic A (Kind of) Short Story Open to Beta Reading! 🙂 in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@delightinlife
I read your story and so far, to me it looks good. I don’t have a suggestion for a title because honestly, I didn’t quite know what was going on. You dropped me into another world with fighting and everything…That happened way too quickly. I know this is beta and you’re just starting out, but I’d say, write a little more of the…[Read more] -
Cloudy replied to the topic A (Kind of) Short Story Open to Beta Reading! 🙂 in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@delight in life
I read your story and so far, to me it looks good. I don’t have a suggestion for a title because honestly, I didn’t quite know what was going on. You dropped me into another world with fighting and everything…That happened way too quickly. I know this is beta and you’re just starting out, but I’d say, write a little more of the…[Read more] -
Cloudy started the topic Short Story Critique in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
Okay, I posted this story quite a while ago on my blog, and I’m starting to write more and more short stories whenever I have writer’s block on my Novellette. So I’ve been thinking about writing a short story collection ebook, and this means I have to get my stories as good as possible. So any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated.…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@delightinlife EST. I guess that does make a difference. 😛 Though I do have to go now. I’ve edited about two and a half chapters! Good luck!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@delightinlife Yep! Still here for a little bit, though I’ll have dinner sooner or later.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@winter-rose @ethryndal @daeus @kate-flournoy @that_writer_girl_99 @jane-maree @graciegirl @jess
Hey guys! I’m editing and might do some random writing if anyone wants to join. -
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