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Sage G replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 6 years, 10 months ago
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Sage G replied to the topic Calling all artists! in the forum Characters 6 years, 10 months ago
@clairec I’d love to give it a shot! 🙂 It should be fun!
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Sage G replied to the topic Little Story Wants Readers in the forum Short Story Critiques 6 years, 11 months ago
@waterlily I really enjoyed your snippet!
You captured my attention right away, and I loved the dialog, I wanted to keep reading. ;]
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Sage G replied to the topic I'm Dreaming of a White Christmas with Every Christmas Card I Write in the forum Art 6 years, 11 months ago
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Sage G replied to the topic I'm Dreaming of a White Christmas with Every Christmas Card I Write in the forum Art 6 years, 11 months ago
@mariposa Your winter scenes are so pretty!
We do homemade Christmas cards every year. I’ve been filling them out all night, and now my hand is about to fall off! haha
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Sage G are now friends 7 years ago
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Sage G replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@winter-rose I was working on a blog post earlier too!
Same here, have a good night!
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Sage G replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@winter-rose My first ever attempt at a full length novel….but mostly procrastinating right now.
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Sage G replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@winter-rose *shakes hand* Good to meet you, Gabby, I’m Sage. :3
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Sage G replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@winter-rose No worries, I’m still here! haha
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Sage G replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@winter-rose Hey, I’m out here!
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Sage G replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years ago
@daeus This is a really interesting idea, I’m very intrigued! I actually really like diary format stories, I’ve thought of writing one, myself.
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Sage G posted a new activity comment 7 years, 1 month ago
@cloudy I just finished your story, and I really enjoyed it! Your ideas were very unique, and creative.
One little thing I want to mention, is that during character dialog, you only indented the lines toward the end; I would suggest indenting all conversation.
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Sage G replied to the topic The Author's Attic in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 1 month ago
@rolena-hatfield Awesome! I just started a blog not too long ago too, and I’ve been wanting to find other bloggers to follow! looking forward to your future posts. 😉
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Sage G posted a new activity comment 7 years, 1 month ago
Hi @cloudy! So, I managed to go through 5 parts today.
Your story is really interesting, and I’m having a lot of fun working on it!
(Also, I hope I did it right, not too familiar with google docs >.<)-
@sage-g You did just fine. Thanks! I was surprised how much you were working on yesterday. Btw, it’s not required but you can comment, e.g.: I like this bit, Change this paragraph, your sentences feel too choppy here. Stuff like that. But only if you want to. 🙂
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@cloudy I just finished your story, and I really enjoyed it! Your ideas were very unique, and creative.
One little thing I want to mention, is that during character dialog, you only indented the lines toward the end; I would suggest indenting all conversation.
Anyway, I hope I was helpful to you, it was fun! 🙂
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Sage G's profile was updated 7 years, 1 month ago
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Sage G posted a new activity comment 7 years, 1 month ago
Hey, @cloudy! I don’t have much practice in the ‘editing’ realm, but I can give it a try. I know I’m grateful when a family member proof-reads my writing, so I’ll try to be of help!
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Okay! @sage-g Welcome abord! I’ll give you the link to the stories. They’re already on one doc. I advise opening up the doc outline so it’s easier. Read and comment at your leisure. I just need help on all of the different parts. XD
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Sage G replied to the topic Hey, hi, hello! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 1 month ago
@catwing Sounds interesting… I’m sure I’ll come here at some point when I need advice.
@corissa-maiden-of-praise Thanks for sparing a moment on me. 😉
@epicaddie2 I’ve never heard of it, but I just might have to fix that!
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