Rachel

Welcome to KP, stalker! Glad you finally figured out our difficult password creation system. You’re in an elite group now. You should be proud. *nods*

My favorite genre to write is futuristic/dystopians too!

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Well I was doing each letter. That could be a voice thing for your MC. How she pronounces it. Maybe it could be a contrast to the way another character says it. As in, maybe she says NAHF-sigh but another character says each letter. Just a thought. I’m not sure if it matches with your story or not.

Well no. It feels more like a narration. I feel…[Read more]

This is really good! What genre is this? Sci-Fi? It’s pretty gripping, I would say.

NAFFSI is a bit of a mouthful, however, and I found myself stumbling over it as I was reading. Also, her flashback is sort of a bit on the ‘telling’ side which doesn’t really fit with a flashback. Normally, a flashback would be a specific place and have specific…[Read more]

Hi Cass! Good to see you on the forum! And I remember you submitting in the past! It sounds you have some interesting things to say about writing and literature, perhaps you should consider writing an article and submitting again? 😉

I hope you enjoy the forum and are encouraged!

– Reagan

Hello Kat! Welcome to the Kingdom Pen forum! Feel free to explore, post, and ask if you have any questions. We also have a board for suggestions, so if you have any ideas on how the forum could be improved, please leave a comment. 🙂

And writing that first chapter of new novel is always exciting! Good for you! I hope you are encouraged to write…[Read more]

Awesome, Kat! I’ve read Ender’s Game myself.

As far as what I’m reading now. I’m about to start This Present Darkness by Frank Peretti. I’m really looking forward to it.