@rolena-hatfield
Active 6 years, 6 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Emily D started the topic Help With Dialogue in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Hi All!
@Daeus, @Rolena-Hatfield, @Jess, @Northerner, @Brandon-Miller, @Mark-Kambiya I was wondering if you could help my best friend Holly Nelson-Gray. She has asked a question on dialogue but it doesn’t seemed to have reached anyone. If any of you could respond she and I would be most grateful. It’s on the forum under thr topic Balancing…[Read more]
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Jess replied to the topic Blogs: What Would You Like to See More of? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
I too like the philosophical musings and such. I tend to gravitate towards blogs with a lot of personality too. But I’m mostly there for writing and such. I enjoy the odd short story because I like to see that the people know what they’re talking about when it comes to writing. 😉
And everyone has said all the author blogs I…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
Hi guys! The story is due in a few days, (the 16th), though I want to turn it in by tomorrow. 😛 Anything I’m missing from this revised draft? (The editors said I should work more on character, so if you see anything that might be able to make it deeper, let me know.) Thanks!
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Blogs: What Would You Like to See More of? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
I can’t honestly say, because my own blog is my ideal blog. It blends the topic of story and Christianity/philosophy/opinion articles with some fitness on the side. I sort of want it to be like the Nerdwriter Youtube channel which I think is just totally awesome.
But as for topics, I honestly love philosophical musings and a…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Blogs: What Would You Like to See More of? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
I love your profile picture, it’s so cute.
Anyway.
My favorite blogs…well, I don’t have just one single aspect that keeps me coming back, but I love personality. I love sassy authors, like @ethryndal. She’s not afraid to say her opinion–no matter how crazy–and it keeps me reading.
My favorite blog would have to be the…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Blogs: What Would You Like to See More of? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
I love your profile picture, it’s so cute.
Anyway.
My favorite blogs…well, I don’t have just one single aspect that keeps me coming back, but I love personality. I love sassy authors, like @ethryndal. She’s not afraid to say her opinion–no matter how crazy–and it keeps me reading.
My favorite blog would have to be the…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Blogs: What Would You Like to See More of? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
I love your profile picture, it’s so cute.
Anyway.
My favorite blogs…well, I don’t have just one single aspect that keeps me coming back, but I love personality. I love sassy authors, like @ethryndal. She’s not afraid to say her opinion–no matter how crazy–and it keeps me reading.
My favorite blog would have to be…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Thank you for the input. I shall see what I can do. *alright words. You are at my command, so why don’t you do something*
@perfectfifths Oh goody! I need picky people. 😛 Thanks for the edits! I need them all!
@rolena-hatfield Hmm…I see what you mean. *note to self for future reference*
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
Please someone, anyone, I implore you on bended knee… draw Josiah the Wiser, sporting his scraggly coarse tarantula beard, with a frog (grinning evilly) on his head. Anyone who can draw, please try… if you need references, just look at his avatar, or watch the Stereotype videos
@Daeus
@Hope
@Kina-Lamb
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien, @rolena-hatfield and @michael-stanton are ENFPS. I think there are some others, but they’re not coming to mind.
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Snapper started the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum 7 years, 6 months ago
Hi guys! @daeus @kate-flournoy @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @aratrea @rolena-hatfield @f5a8c3e9 @hope @perfectfifths @winter-rose @jess @emma-flournoy @northerner @overcomer @anyone else
So, I working on a short story mystery for a contest due this month, and I was wondering if you all could critique this for me. It’s 970 words or so, and…[Read more] -
Snapper started the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum 7 years, 6 months ago
Hi guys! @daeus @kate-flournoy @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @aratrea @rolena-hatfield @f5a8c3e9 @hope @perfectfifths @winter-rose @jess @emma-flournoy @northerner @overcomer @anyone else
So, I working on a short story mystery for a contest due this month, and I was wondering if you all could critique this for me. It’s 970 words or so, and can’t…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic It is finished!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@rolena-hatfield Yep.
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 7 years, 6 months ago
Okay, can someone put the picture they drew of Daeus’s Teedletidum’s actually on here, cause I can’t follow the link and I’m dying to see them.
Here, see if anyone wants to draw this person…
He’s an older teen, about eighteen or nineteen. His hair is longer, but not like shoulder length long or anything, just shaggy and long. Like Hiccup. And…[Read more]
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Corissa Maiden of Praise replied to the topic Ah, Just One More Thing in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
Hey everyone! Just one more call throughout the Kingdom (along with the splendiferous help of @Daeus‘s tag) to see if any other KeePers will be at the Best of British Science and Bible Conference at the Creation Museum next Friday and Saturday! Just because I’ve not had time to be on here doesn’t mean I’ve forgotten about you all, and I look…[Read more]
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ClaireC replied to the topic Finished! in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
Just letting you all know, that I have gotten your replies, and love them all!
I will get back to you if I have time, but for now know that your responses are appreciated. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 :)…[Read more] -
Snapper started the topic Happy Easter! in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
Hi all! Happy Easter!
He is Risen!And the angel answered and said unto the women, Fear not ye: for I know that ye seek Jesus, which was crucified. He is not here: for he is risen, as he said. Come, see the place where the Lord lay. And go quickly, and tell his disciples that he is risen from the dead; and, behold, he goeth before you into…
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Snapper started the topic Happy Easter! in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 7 months ago
Hi all! Happy Easter!
He is Risen!@daeus @kate-flournoy @jess @ethryndal @that_writer_girl_99 @theliterarycrusader @aratrea @spradlin @jadamae @mark-kamibaya @warrioroftherealm @hope @emma-flournoy @northerner @winter-rose @kina-lamb @rolena-hatfield @clairec @perfectfifths @gretald @his-instrument @christi-eaton @aella @audrey-caylin @feedingmy…[Read more]
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FeedingMyGoldfish replied to the topic *stands up to introduce self* *trips* in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 7 months ago
@rolena-hatfield Black squirrels are amazing. I just can’t pick because I’m so obsessed with all of them. 😛
I’m happy that you’re happy. 🙂 And I’m glad you love the name. XD *realizes I’m dashing off to take care of guinea pigs again* (They’re new, and kind of a full-time job to take care of *and* re-tame because of all the commotion.)
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Kate Flournoy posted a new activity comment 7 years, 7 months ago
@rolena-hatfield w… wow. *grins so wide she splits her face* That… makes me incredibly happy. You’re right. I did not even remember that. Congratulations. 😀 *returns flourishing bow* In my experience, truly strong prose is usually one of the last things to come… glad it’s clicking in place for you! 😀
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@kate-flournoy Oh dear! *hands you some duck tape to fix the split in your face* I surely did not mean for that to happen 😀 I’m glad it’s clicking in place too! (at long last!!!!) One of those things that make you think… hmmm… I wished I’d learned this years ago.