@rolena-hatfield
Active 6 years, 6 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Actually, I’m going to take a break too, @rolena-hatfield . Lunch is calling my name …
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
That’s great, @rolena-hatfield ! 🙂 Thanks for writing with me too. I printed out some of my work to trim down, and copied some notes.
If you would like to write some more, or if anyone else would like to write with me, I’ll be writing for another 30 minutes.
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
That sounds perfect! @rolena-hatfield 🙂
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Sure, I’ll join, @rolena-hatfield . 🙂 How long do you plan to write for?
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Kate Flournoy posted an update 8 years, 2 months ago
Hello lovely KeePers… just dropping a line to let you know that I and @Emma-Flournoy both are going to be gone for two weeks starting Wednesday the 14th… going out West on vacation with the family. So, we haven’t died if you tag us and we don’t respond. 😀 Don’t have too many great discussions without me.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Welcome Says Me! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 2 months ago
@gideon-sowdon It was @rolena-hatfield. 🙂 In the forum “Howdy” under Start Here. 😉
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Luke C. replied to the topic Howdy! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 2 months ago
@hope I don’t know; I don’t really consider myself an expert on the male mind. :p Most of what I can think of is already tooted in conservative circles.
@rolena-hatfield Very little: As a kid, I put together a slideshow or two of two cats with subtitles that had an annoying song which was probably not appropriate for children. Then when I and…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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BlueJay posted an update 8 years, 2 months ago
I have got BIG news. (No I didn’t just get engaged.) I entered a writing competition a few months ago and the presentation for the prizes was last night. I had just moved out of the 14-18yrs, so I was against adults. *nervous gulp* But here are the results.
Adult short story – Anna’s Savanna – 1st place
Adult poetry – I’m proud to be Australian -…[Read more]-
Wow!! Way to go, @Bluejay! Great work! Congratulations! So proud of you. 😀
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@kate-flournoy Oh, thanks. 🙂 I was so shocked when it happened. 😀
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Wow, @bluejay , that’s awesome! 😀
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I hope we get to read some of this stuff …
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@overcomer *taps side of nose* You might… *mysterious grin* 😀
And thanks. 🙂
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That’s fantastic and super exciting! Congratulations! I love the fact that we have amazing KeePers who are sharing their stories. Great work! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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From stories shared, we learn. 🙂 @christi-eaton I should go in for quote making. 😛
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You totally should @bluejay 🙂 Who knows I may have to use some of your stuff. I love quotes, and accidentally stumbling across good ones 🙂
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Sweet @bluejay! 🙂
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😉 @daeus Totally (please tell me that you’ve seen Finding Nemo.)
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@bluejay I have. What does that have to do with this?
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I got it! 😀
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@christi-eaton & @julia-r Yay! You got it. 🙂
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@bluejay– Awesome! That’s so cool! Writing competitions scare me. Way to be brave!
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@julia-r Writing competitions can be scary. I felt sick as we were driving over. But it is a great reward for all the hard work put into story writing.
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Congratulations! That’s really exciting. You keep writing those stories, and someday you’ll make a difference in the world.
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@anna-brie I hope to make a difference one day. My younger sister wants to publish a set of stories about a cat called Chaos, that I’ve written, so maybe one day….
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Woo Hoo! Way to go, @bluejay
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@clairec Thank you. 🙂
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Congratulations, @bluejay!!!!!! That is so exciting!
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@hope I still can’t believe that it’s happened!!!!!!! Thanks.
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@dragon-snapper Finding writing competitions is definitely hard. I only know one or two.
*grins* No worries. *takes one of the ice creams and sits licking it happily*-
@dragon-snapper For some reason your comment has disappeared. 🙁 Did you want to write a new one? 😉
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*sniffs pitifully* It doesn’t like me!!! Wahhh!
Anyways, I said something about finding KP in my search for writing competitions, and Congratulations!-
@dragon-snapper I think it was partly my fault. Did you “reply” to the comment I sent to Hope. Cause I found a spelling error in my message, after you had posted, and so I deleted it and made a new message and it probably took yours too. You can go to you history if you wanted to find out what you said.
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DUDETTE!!!! THIS IS SO AWESOME!!!! *high fives all around* SERIOUSLY AWESOME JOB! I am so proud of you! 😀 😀 😀
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*returns high five* Ah, thanks Sarah. 😀 😀 😀
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Oh, wow @bluejay! That’s awesome! Much applause! 😀
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🙂 😀 🙂 😀 🙂 😀 🙂 😀 Thank you. 🙂 😀 🙂 😀 🙂 😀 🙂 😀 🙂
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Yay!!! That’s so exciting! I would’ve been so nervous to go up against adults. Good for you! 🙂 Would you mind posting Chaos and The Drummer Boy? I’d sure like to read them. 🙂
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@sarah-h I was nervous. Extremely nervous. I only expected a highly commended. I will definitely let you read Chaos and The Drummer Boy. I shall send them to @spradlin for publishing. (Only with Chaos, it’s a series of stories which if you read number 3. (which this one is) it won’t make much sense. I shall have to send in 1 & 2.
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@bluejay Great! I can’t wait to read them! 🙂
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Hey, hey! @bluejay That’s awesome! 😀 😀 😀 😀 CONGRATULATIONS. <3
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Thanks @gretald
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So happy for you, @bluejay! Congratulations!
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@ingridrd 🙂 😀 🙂 😀 Thanks.
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You rock, dude! (How’s that for a Finding Nemo reference. 😛 )
You won ALL the categories??!!
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Sweet…..Totally! 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 There were more categories, but those four were the ones I entered. 🙂
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So you won all four of the ones you entered!!
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@emma-flournoy I only got an encouragement award for one of the categories. 🙂
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Oh whoops…it says that. 😛
But still!
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Wow–that’s awesome @bluejay! Congrats!!!
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Thanks @aratrea 🙂
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@jadamae Thank you. Well, I thought people might get a bit confused as we had just been told BIG news and then I said I had BIG news. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Aw @winter-rose Thank you.
You guys are all so awesome. 🙂
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BlueJay started the topic The Hobbit in the forum 8 years, 2 months ago
@graciekry @his-instrument @jess @clairec @the-happy-bookaholic @dragon-snapper @timothy-young @warrioroftherealm @winter-rose @ingridrd @aysia-serene @adry_grace @daeus @belegteleri @hope @overcomer @vanna @faithdk @kate-flournoy @jadamae @hislittlerose @hannah-krynicki @writefury @hannah-olsen @dbhgodreigns @wordfitlyspoken @hannah-c @spradlin @i…[Read more]
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Greta posted a new activity comment 8 years, 2 months ago
@rolena-hatfield Being a camp counselor is fun, though! 🙂 What sort of camp was it? My summer was awesome! I got to go on a nice long vacation and have some quality time with my family.
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Snapper replied to the topic Why We Do This in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rolena-hatfield
Ha, ha! I love number 5! My characters are always yelling at more for my procrastinations! -
BlueJay replied to the topic The Next Book Choosing in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@graciekry @his-instrument @jess @clairec @the-happy-bookaholic @dragon-snapper @timothy-young @warrioroftherealm @emma-flournoy @winter-rose @ingridrd @aysia-serene @adry_grace @daeus @belegteleri @hope @overcomer @vanna @faithdk @gretald @kate-flournoy @jadamae @hislittlerose @hannah-krynicki @writefury @hannah-olsen @zoe-wingfeather @dbhgodreign…[Read more]
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Greta posted an update 8 years, 2 months ago
@rolena-hatfield
Long time no see. Nice to “see” you again! 🙂-
Hey @gretald! Nice to “see” you again too! It has been a long time since I’ve been around KP. Mostly because I was gone for the summer at camp as a counselor. I missed the community here! How was your summer? Did you have any family vacations?
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@rolena-hatfield Being a camp counselor is fun, though! 🙂 What sort of camp was it? My summer was awesome! I got to go on a nice long vacation and have some quality time with my family.
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BlueJay replied to the topic The Next Book Choosing in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@graciekry @his-instrument @jess @clairec @the-happy-bookaholic @dragon-snapper @timothy-young @warrioroftherealm @emma-flournoy @winter-rose @ingridrd @christi-eaton @aysia-serene @adry_grace @daeus @belegteleri @hope @overcomer @vanna @faithdk @anna-brie @gretald @kate-flournoy @jadamae @hislittlerose @hannah-krynicki @writefury @hannah-olsen @zo…[Read more]
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At least, you can assume we haven’t died. 😛
Have fun on vacation! 😀