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Active 7 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Merry Christmas and Happy Plot Holes in the forum Plotting 8 years, 4 months ago
@emily Ah, yes, the middle. *glares at my arch nemesis* 😛
I think you’re going to find your answer by looking at the ending. What’s the plot resolution? What is the character resolution? What does your character learn at the end? Then, you can compare that to what you have at the start, and work backwards until you’re at the beginning. I think…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Would someone please tell me if these first chapters are too depressing? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 4 months ago
@His-Instrument Got it.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Pinterest in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 4 months ago
You know what, maybe you could just put two straight and fairly defined black lines down the sides of the one you fixed, about half an inch from the edge.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Pinterest in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus hm… better-ish? I like the first re-do, but it isn’t perfect. What program are you using to put these together? Because putting in white boxes is like… as basic as the abcs…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Pinterest in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus whooo, my eyes are crossing. 😛
None of these are particularly amazing in my very humble opinion, though I do think the second has potential. The biggest problem is the composition— there are no lines to define where graphic meets text, or to organize the whole thing for us so our eyes have to do as little bouncing around as…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@daughteroftheking @emily @shannon @dekreel @seekjustice
I am sick and I cannot keep any food down. UGHHH. Just in time for Christmas. Please pray that I am better for our choir performance tomorrow night and of course for Christmas day. Thanks!
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Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Writers' Corner #12 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@emily I’m re-outling my nano novel 🙂
Bye! Merry Christmas!
@anyone I’ll be on for about ten more minutes.
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Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Writers' Corner #12 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
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Ingrid replied to the topic Writers' Corner #12 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@emily @audrey-caylin *sigh* Well, now I have to leave because this printer is not working…I. Hate. Technology. LOL 😉 Bye and Merry Christmas!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Writers' Corner #12 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@emily It’s the one with the synopsis I think I showed you…about Jaclyn. 🙂
I actually don’t know how long I’ve been working on it…over a year because I put it down and picked it back up again. Yeah, I am super excited!!!!
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Audrey Caylin replied to the topic We'll Ignore that I'm on a Hiatus…. in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@dragon-snapper I think taking a break might be a good idea. Whether you want to finish up this draft depends on the kind of person you are. If not finishing it is more discouraging, then definitely finish it. But if you’re going to end up hating the plot and feeling like you’re wasting time by finishing it, I’d take a break.
What Emily said…[Read more]
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Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Writers' Corner #12 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@emily I’m here! I’ve got some outlining to do 😀 (though I may have to pop away and help my mom bake in a few moments)
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Ingrid replied to the topic Writers' Corner #12 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@emily I am heeeere! I’m actually doing some final edits (well, I say ‘final’ but it is the first draft) of my novel and then printing it off as a Christmas present for my family.
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Emily D replied to the topic Hi, I'm GabbyJ! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 4 months ago
@GabbyJ Â I’m glad you like them! Â As for music, I play classical piano, so I love classical music. Â But as for songs, I’m more of a Christian pop fan (Britt Nicole, Newsboys, and some of Audio Adrenaline’s and The After’s songs-I haven’t heard heaps of their stuff but I like a lot of what I’ve heard from them). Â What kind of movie soundtracks do…[Read more]
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Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Writers' Corner #12 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@dekreel I know XD
Don’t rush it! And you could always have a sequel. Or turn it into a serial story…sorry, I’m just spilling more ideas 😛
I’m going to call it a night for writing. Instead of my character giving pushback, I’m running out of energy XD I hope your writing goes well! And if I’m not back on before Christmas, Merry Christmas!
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Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Writers' Corner #12 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@dekreel for me, it’s writer’s speak for being unable to come up with an answer to any of the questions. For instance, if the question is “What are his (or her) fears?” and I can’t find any, I take that as the character giving “pushback.” Really, it’s because I haven’t delved that deep into the character yet because part of me likes them being all…[Read more]
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Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Writers' Corner #12 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@dekreel How many chapters do you think you’ll have?
I’m doing a character interview. It’s for my protagonist for my current dystopian novel. So far, I haven’t gotten any pushback from her 😉
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Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Writers' Corner #12 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@dekreel yeah, I’ll definitely have to try it! 😀
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Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Writers' Corner #12 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@dekreel nice! Congrats!
That’s really cool! I’m not much of a poet myself (I do a little free verse), but I enjoy reading it.
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Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Writers' Corner #12 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@dekreel HI 😀
Hm… I’ve actually never thought of that 😛 I should add it to my character questionnaire XD
How’s the KeePer Adventure going?
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