@rolena-hatfield
Active 8 years, 4 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Help! I don't understand my characters! in the forum Characters 8 years, 9 months ago
@Shannon Ooooooooh boy. I’m probably not the most qualified to say anything on this subject, as I’ve had horrible struggles with my own characters, but… here goes anyway.
Like you, I’ve never had much luck with character questionnaires. And I think maybe the reason for that is because answering a bunch of black-and-white questions with equally…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Title opinions? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@Dekreel @That_Writer_Girl_99 @Dragon-snapper @Ethryndal @Daeus @Audrey-caylin @Jane-maree @Shannon @Sam-Kowal wow, thanks so much guys, all of you. Just getting the general feedback and feeling out opinion about the existing title helped me get so much more perspective.
@Jane-Maree, believe it or not, I had actually already considered Destroyer,…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel Oooooo….ahhhhhh. 😉
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Ingrid replied to the topic Help! I don't understand my characters! in the forum Characters 8 years, 9 months ago
@shannon I don’t know about you, but when I first think of a character, I think of a face/name…and something about them that is weird. That really helps to get the creative juices flowing a little bit.
When you are actually writing characters, don’t. Make. Them. Perfect. Make them real. Make them relatable. Give them a problem and/or…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
Random quote:
“So. How’s life with the humans?”
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Audrey Caylin replied to the topic Title opinions? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@kate-flournoy I’m dying to read your book now because THE THEME.
Anyway.
I like “Victorious,” but also all the dozens of ideas suggested above are cool. My only contribution is “Vanquished.” I guess it depends on what sort of image you want to bring to mind with the title. Maybe imagining it on a book cover will help?
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Snapper replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel Well…yes. There is a reason. The reason was that at the time I was bored, couldn’t find a name for the castle. So I glanced around the room–this was during homeschool break–saw a Singer sowing maching, and thus it was the name of the castle was born. 😉
Ooh yay! I’m curious to see how you portray me.
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Ingrid replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel That’s great news! Congratulations! *shakes your hand vigorously*
(And I must echo @dragon-snapper‘s question because I am just as curious…don’t feel obligated to put me into the story but…maybe?)
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Snapper posted an update 8 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel Heya! I was thinking about making another Legend of King Daeus, but I know you’re writer your KPA, and I’d hate to insert myself, you know, steal the thunder. Would you like to finish the KPA before I got going on the Legend of King Daeus 3?
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Ingrid replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@dragon-snapper You got mine. That one was kinda easy. 😉
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Snapper replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel Yay! I can’t wait! 😀 (Question: Am I in the story? No pressure, but I do have a tinge of writerly curiosity.)
(It’s written ‘Regnis’. It’s something spelled backwards. I’ll let you figure it out, if you wish.) 😉
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Snapper replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel Okay, I was going to reply to you, but first I forgot and then I was busy, but enough excuses.
Mythbusters!!! Man I knew that sounded familiar.
@supermonkey42 Megamind, when Metroman and Megamind are arguing about the Heat of Revenge and the full, concentration power of the sun!
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Title opinions? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@Kate-Flournoy WAIT, HOW DID I NOT KNOW DUNSTAN GETS HIS OWN BOOK? That’s cool.
And honestly, Victorious doesn’t bother me too much. Granted, it’s not the kind of title that smacks you in the heart, but neither is it grating, like, say, Finding Freedom! or something horribly cliche like that. If you do end up keeping that title, I wouldn’t…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@supermonkey42 Yes! What’s your quote? (You won, so you quote next)
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Snapper replied to the topic Title opinions? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
Oh dear. Titles.
Um….
Here are some brainstorms:
‘Accused’
‘Trial’
‘Justifiable’
‘Warlaw…’ (insert Loki facepalm here)
What kind of title are you going for?
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Snapper replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@ingridrd Avengers! First person is Captain America, and the second is Iron Man. 😀
Here’s a quote: “Pain, love it.”
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Ingrid replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
I’ve got one.
“We need a plan of attack!”
“I have a plan: attack!”
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Kate Flournoy started the topic Title opinions? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
Hey, KeePers. I know I keep popping on and off very randomly, and I do hope sometime to be able to get back to a more regular presence, but for now this’ll have to do. 😛
I have a question for you guys. See, I have this book. I wrote it when I was fourteen and it’s due for a serious rewrite. That part is all under control.
But I’m having a bit…[Read more]
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Snapper posted an update 8 years, 9 months ago
I’d rather be writing.
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Ingrid replied to the topic I'm rubbish at this… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago
@dekreel Thanks!
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Hmm… *shrug* Go ahead and write it! I have the feeling the KPA will take some time; as far as I can tell, it’s so long it needs chapters… Or at least that’s the plan. I have a hole in my plot (AGAIN! grrrrrrr). Can I please be in the next LOKD?? *big fanged smile*
Haha! I’ll do my best to include you. I’ll try to include everyone, but I have a hard time including a lot of characters in one story. That’s one way that your’s will be awesome. It can have a lot of people. 😀
Welp, I’ll go ahead and write, see what happens.