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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice, @rochellaine, just to be clear, beta readers are kind of what y’all are doing with @valtmy ‘s and what you did with Seekjustice’s book, right? where you read it part by part and critique it?
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice, @rochellaine, doesn’t the song Proud of Your Boy from Aladdin kinda reflect both Justice and Zac during the bar fight? not completely, but somewhat?
(it probably doesn’t but I’m listening to that broadway right now and that song just came on and so that thought lept into my brain)
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice, @rochellaine, I have to say, I liked Zac a lot better than Justice from the beginning. I mean, I knew he was going to turn out better, but even before he did I could see that he was acting the way he was as protection against getting hurt. Which made him opening up to Chessy so easily and quickly a bit confusing.
Justice was…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
I don’t mind being held accountable to you who are on the other side of the world, because I’m already accountable to my sister for Quillon and she’s in the same bedroom. If Quillon dies, I die too. 😀
I fluctuate between adoring Justice and absolutely hating him. He could possibly die if I’m in a bad mood.
And no, Chessy…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@rochellaine, I don’t know. If she is willing to kill someone as wonderful as Jonas I think she is capable of anything…
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
Hey, I was wondering if you would do a favour for me? You’ve given me some invaluable feedback on Stars Fill Infinity but would you mind filling out the questions at the end of the second book? Just so I can get some more indepth thoughts on that one as well? Thanks!
Anyone around?
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Alia posted an update 7 years, 10 months ago
So I’m not quite sure where to share this, but I guess this will work.Â
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15qXXuDlcATOMuOeglLrH6jK0RDXPbSIMEFHWir_IMJg/edit?usp=sharing
This is a doc I made with a character checklist. Feel free to copy it, add on, tweak, whatever.
@jenwriter17, @seekjustice, @ariel-ashira, @rochellaine, @valtmy, and whoever…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice, @jenwriter17, @valtmy, @rochellaine anyone on?
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Jenna Terese started the topic Guess What???? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
I’m just gonna come right out and say it…
I HAVE A WEBSITE!
I just finished it last night and here it is if y’all want to check it out
I don’t have any blog posts up yet (I will later today). Let me know if you see anything that needs improving, or if there’s anything wrong with the site. Oh, and the contact form…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
Well, that would have been clever if she could have got it to work. 🙂
Anyway I’m going to go to bed now because *gasp* its 10:15 I’ll talk tomorrow…or the day after or whatever 😛
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
Well, hopefully I would. 🙂 I like that the leave the ending open to interpretation though, even if its kind of maddening 😛 I’m surprised that she didn’t show him the tiger door and then throw herself in to die with him in some tragic Romeo and Juliet type thing.
Which I’m glad didn’t happen, just so you know.
Okay, I’ll look it…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
I just love the whole idea of it. I’m currently reading the plot of the original short story 😛
Its funny because the sermon we were watching as I read the synopsis was about relationships between men and women, particularly dating, so it was very applicable 😀
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
No I haven’t heard of him, this speaker is Louie Giglio from Passion Church in Atlanta. Have you heard of him?
I’m just looking at the synopsis. It looks pretty cool, especially the second story so far.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
Sorry for the late reply, I was out all day yesterday and have only just got back from church now.
Basically, I fixed most of the things you pointed out Valtmy, in the second draft and I fixed it quite simply. Unfortunately though, I don’t know what to do with character of Mathias. :/
I agree with pretty much everything you…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@rochellaine yeah that was Gideon that said that. 😀 that was funny!
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
OK it’s good that that’s going to be fixed in the next draft. 😀
I read your fanfics! They are really sweet and cute! 😊
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
As I have said, I am fine with the sparing of Mathias. The contrived resolution I am speaking of is the resolution to the Caderousse-Chessy conflict which is resolved with Caderousse, much like Javert, letting Chessy go and committing suicide later. In the original Les Mis, this was a fitting and sufficient resolution because of…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@rochellaine Oh yes, I love his voice! I really like deep voices. 🙂
I really like “Bless Yore Beautiful Hide” too. Maybe that’s my favorite 😉
I also liked Gideon, forgot to mention him.
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@alia This is cool! Are we allowed to print it off and use it for our own characters?
@jenwriter17, yep go ahead. I put it here so y’all could have access to it and use it however you want
@alia thanks! 🙂
@jenwriter17, yep, no problem