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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
I liked The Fiddler on the Roof, but I felt it missed a lot of potential. I honestly didn’t like Tevye that much and I wished the story revolved more around the daughters, I especially wish they’d been more closure to Chava and the girl who married the Bolshevik, who’s name I forget. I felt it just….stopped.
I actually felt the…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
Yes, exactly right. And while I won’t say things were perfect for women back then, they aren’t perfect now, and they’ve never been perfect. Every era has its failings, that doesn’t make one period better or worse, in my opinion.
I’ve heard of Abigail Adams because you’ve talked about her before. 😀 and I have listened to some of…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
I’m pretty sure I’ve had pizza with eggs on it too, but I’m not sure. I don’t know if a lot of people do it, but our family used to have a pancakes and icecream for dinner night once in a blue moon.
Maybe she just wasn’t as much into romance? I don’t remember her being as much of a romantic, but its been years since I read the…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
My family and I were just discussing we have inhibiting societal rules like not eating pizza for breakfast and Mum said they probably had breakfast pizza in America, so I thought I’d asked.
A character based on the real Laura Ingalls would be really cool! And that’s a massive pet peeve of mine as well. Girls a…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
Is it true that in America you guys have breakfast pizza??? If so, my whole view of American society has been changed for the better.
Oh yes, the average modern romance, even the Christian ones, tend to be….sketchy.
Its all right, I love listening to rants. Even though the rant wasn’t directed at me, and it was about a romance novel. 😛
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
You find our flirting attempts hilarious???
Oh, I remember that 😀 It was the reason I added the second window scene 😛
True…still, I think it works. Maybe.
Yep, me too. And those memories tend to torment me forever. 🙂
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice, @valtmy, @rochellaine, it is 11 here so I’m gonna sign out now. Talk to y’all later.
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@valtmy, yeah, my characters are never going to flirt. Probably the main reason is that I am going to try and not write in romance *glares at two characters in book 2 of a series I have just started*.
@seekjustice, I’m pretty sure the same thing happens to me, however I can’t write about it because I’m not informed until later where the…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
I guess I can accept that but I would really like for the reason why these people are following this fellow who is clearly less wise than them to be explained in the story. Maybe when Jonas and Chessy are talking after he asks her whether she likes Justice, Jonas can mention that.
Speaking of characters that are bad at…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
Don’t blame Zac. It’s just that I’m really bad at flirting.
And yes, it would have been really interesting (except my sister. of course, lives in the same house as me, so I wouldn’t dare). Also, one of the cons I had written down for the point of killing Zac was: “He wouldn’t get to be with Neva”. ?????? Why would Zac want to be w…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@rochellaine, yeah, I guess that is part of it. Probably the main reason I don’t ship them because it wasn’t til near the end of book two that I got the impression that Justice made the faith his own and not simply thinking believing in God was all that mattered.
Ooh, and I agree with what you said to @valtmy about the whole leader thing.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
Fair enough. And yes, Enjolras is very much a noble character with a noble revolution, whereas Justice most definitely is not.
And yes, it would have been very interesting. I’m sure @rochellaine wishes I’d done it. 😀
haha… 😀 Can you imagine Justice saving rich people from the guillotine? 😛 Its not him.
@alia Okey dokey…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@rochellaine, honestly, if a guy did that to me I’d find it pretty darn romantic, but like I said, there’s just something about those two. I don’t even know what it is, but for some reason I do not ship them. No clue why.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
Well, Enjolras actually seems like a balanced mixture of no-nonsense, sense, briskness and actual…politeness. Justice lacks politeness. and sense. and basically everything other than revolutionary fervour.
In fairness, the original window scene was entirely a practical thing. A…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@rochellaine, well I guess @seekjustice failed with getting me to ship them through the window scene, because I like them as friends and really hope Chessy gets over liking him and he gets over liking her because I really like them as friends, but not as a couple. I don’t know, its just something about them together doesn’t appeal to me
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Alia started the topic Betas wanted! Apply here! I beg of you! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 10 months ago
Okay, so a while ago I posted the first three chapters on my book Decisions to see if anyone had any thoughts. Now I’m hoping for some beta readers (is that what they are called? I don’t know). So yeah, I’ll be posting chapters hopefully regularly.
@rochellaine, @seekjustice, @jenwriter17, @valtmy
@anyone-else-still-on-KP-cuz-I-honestly-don’t-eve…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@rochellaine, wait, he didn’t? Never mind, ignore what I said then I thought he did and that annoyed me, but if it was all what other people saw then it makes sense and is fine.
(but I still didn’t like him as a person, that I know)
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice @rochellaine @alia
Hey guys. I’m here now.
Ooh a discussion on SFI which I can actually participate in now…
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
Oooh, I love conflicting opinions! 😛
Personally, I believe he was too emotionless in the first book and waaay too angsty in the second. Neither side of Justice quite captures the glory of Enjolras, which was what I was going for.
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@rochellaine, I agree with you on the most part, but I just didn’t feel much realisticness from him in his own POV
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