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Alia replied to the topic Fairytale Reteling in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
@daughteroftheking, I had a few ideas, but none of them made sense. Do you have an idea?
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NC Stokes posted an update 8 years, 4 months ago
@ingridrd Hello! I finished reading Substitute Wednesday, but I’m just now giving you the critiques. Oops. Because I can’t make comments, I just typed up my critiques. Please forgive me if I sound harsh. I tried to critique it like a book I didn’t know the author of and didn’t know anything about.
Pg 22 –waist not waste
Pg 24 –up to you if yo…[Read more] -
NC Stokes replied to the topic Fairytale Reteling in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
@alia *sweeps in* Did someone say fairy tale retellings!!?? *maniacal grin* Hello, fellow Reteller! So, what has Gothel been doing in the years the royal family has been under the sleeping spell?
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@rochellaine maybe we should put in that classified document everybody’s ranks and positions?
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@ariel-ashira sorry, I can’t be on right now. maybe later, but i’m not sure. I’ll tag ya if i am 😉
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@alia @rochelline @jenwriter17 @seekjustice I am on for a little bit.
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@alia Oh good! I will keep praying.
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Alia replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@ariel-ashira, She hasn’t had to use her cane for the past two days
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Daeus' Ambassadors in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@alia I will just say that I have the first part of the course and it is really really good. Just thought I’d mention it 😛
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@alia How is your sister?
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Raspberry Blood in the forum Poetry 8 years, 4 months ago
@jenwriter17 @alia Aww, thank you, guys!
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Alia replied to the topic Daeus' Ambassadors in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@jenwriter17, I got it, but I haven’t decided yet
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Alia replied to the topic Raspberry Blood in the forum Poetry 8 years, 4 months ago
@ariel-ashira, *sniff* its beautiful…
@catwing, thankfully I have a different name on SE
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Raspberry Blood in the forum Poetry 8 years, 4 months ago
@ariel-ashira haha, this is AWESOME! 😀 😀 😀
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Catwing replied to the topic Aquila in the forum Sci-Fi 8 years, 4 months ago
@leumeister If you need someone I might be able to read them. Though because I’m entering a short story contest and I still need to write it, I can’t do it until after June 4 (which is the day I turn it in so I’ll be done).
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Jenna Terese started the topic Daeus' Ambassadors in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
did anyone else get the email from Daeus about being his ambassador to earn points for his show don’t tell course? Well if you did and you signed up to be an ambassador, then I thought we could share our personalized links here to help each other earn points by people using the link to get a free copy of Daeus’ book. And if you haven’t signed up…[Read more]
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Catwing replied to the topic Raspberry Blood in the forum Poetry 8 years, 4 months ago
@Ariel-Ashira Thanks! I thought it would add more depth and make people remember your lovely poem. :3
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Raspberry Blood in the forum Poetry 8 years, 4 months ago
@catwing Red ink! Perfect idea!
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Catwing replied to the topic Raspberry Blood in the forum Poetry 8 years, 4 months ago
@ariel-Ashira Wow… We KaPeeFer on! *sobs* Raspberry blood. That’s lovely.
When we sign the declaration we should use red ink. (But the one @sam-Kowal shows to SE can omit the names so the spies remain secret.)
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic Raspberry Blood in the forum Poetry 8 years, 4 months ago
Ahh! @jenwriter17 I knew I forgot to tag someone for this!
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Sorry this is such a late response! I was in Tennessee for a week with limited internet access. Anyway, THANK YOU so very much for your comments and taking the time to read my story! And you were most definitely not too harsh. I needed some critical feedback. 🙂 Thanks again!
Glad to be of service! I enjoyed reading it.