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@dekreel This is really cute!

@dekreel Hilarious.

😀

@gh24682468999 Wow!  It’s beautiful!  I don’t really know how to critique free verse, because most of my poems have pretty standard structure and rhyme. 😀  But I’ve attempted free verse a couple of times, and when I showed my mom, (who said she didn’t know how to critique free verse either) what she told me was to make it flow better, and that ac…[Read more]

@hannah-c So, I guess fantasy-exclusive readers wouldn’t read it, but those who read realistic fiction or biographies probably would.

Hello, anyone around?  I’m outlining/writing! (In the daytime, for once. 😀 )

@hannah-c I would read an autobiography written by someone I’ve never heard of for the same reason I would read a book about a character I’d never heard of. 😀  It would just give it an extra flair for me to realize that the character was real…or semi-real.

Answer: Yes; as long as it was interesting. 🙂  And comical and sarcastic is usually interesting.

@epicaddie2 Wow!  Haha!  😀 The last line is my favorite, too.

That’s a really cute and funny poem, @dragon-snapper !  😀

Raspberry, frozen raspberry…I think you’re mine…

Love it!!

Are you going to tag anyone with a topic?

@winter-rose Okay, I think I’ve got to go now too.  Bye!

@perfectfifths Hahahahahaha!!!! 😀 😀

@winter-rose Just starting.  I have a lot of the story and characters planned out, but only a little bit written.  So I’m not quite sure how it’ll end up. 😀

What exactly are you editing?

@winter-rose Hello! I’m working on my western novel.

@seekjustice Sorry I had to leave quickly without signing out last night.  I’ve seen Mary Poppins live, too!  It’s pretty different from the movie.

And since recommending Carousel to you I’ve had it in my head all day – and been listening to the recordings.  😀  But while I was doing that Robert Goulet popped up singing If I Loved You, which rem…[Read more]

@pickupyourpenandwrite Definitely praying for you!

@dekreel It was actually pretty well done.  Since you’ve already had a lot of advice from others about story structure and characters, I’ll just note a couple of editing comments.

First of all, I think you need to do a little more research on helicopters.  The first thing that struck me was the large size of the helicopters you were d…[Read more]

@dekreel CHAP is a homeschool conference in Pennsylvania.  Last year I was there with my family as vendors for our family ministry, and Josiah was there with a KP booth.

@kaya-young Oh, oh…don’t ask!  I’m trying, but it’s not going as fast as I would like.

By the way, I haven’t even found out what happens to her yet! 😀  I’ve done a very little bit of outlining, but mostly I just write as I go and see what comes out. (Which is sometimes a good thing – and sometimes a very bad thing.)