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@freedomwriter76

YESS

My older brother and I are such Spider-Man fans lol.

Rn him my little sister and I are going through all the Marvel movies in order, everything but most of the rated R movies(extremely stupid decision, yes we have sacrificed world communication for this). We’re almost at phase four, gotta work through the tv series tho. As…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

XD hullo there
Love your pfps btw (I could fangirl over Marvel for hours)

lol I have four siblings and my family practically adopted a toddler through babysitting for two years, so for a while I had five.

Oh my goodness how many times I would look up while eating or doing school and my younger sister was staring a death glare…[Read more]

@ava-blue

This is so clever 😀

@whalekeeper

“You will never sleep again;
though you will never stop dreaming.
The end can only follow the beginning.”

*embodiment of what I hope to write;-;*

@freedomwriter76

Yeesssss I love it so much!

lol writing prompt number sixty one perfect realistic sibling relationship XD

@lydia-s

THis is so cool!

For the minute I shall *poetry*
Break My Heart
Joy Harjo

There are always flowers,
Love cries, or blood.
Someone is always leaving
By exile, death, or heartbreak.
The heart is a fist.
It pockets prayer or holds rage.
It’s a timekeeper.
Music maker, or backstreet truth teller.
Baby, baby, baby
You can’t say wha…

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Oof, I see the issue. Lotsa tension right here lol

Great character, btw.

Is she alone with November, or is it November, her and Corvina?
(I love these names)

@godlyfantasy12

Yeessss I love these points in books

*I offer advice based on elementary observations and a house full of constantly injured and nursed daredevil little brothers*

ahem. *places spectacles precariously on nose tip*

Shall we?

For a non-magical injury, he may be concussed depending on how hard he hit his head. If this is in…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I like this! Gj. It came out so well.

@freedomwriter76

(sorry for my late response. I don’t check KP as much as I should. XD)

But YESSS!!!!! You should!!! I hope you enjoy them. A NIGHT DIVIDED WAS AMAZING!!!!!! *high fives* I think it’s a must-read for any historical fiction lover!!!

@whalekeeper

So I might not be getting the problem *exactly* correct, but if you’re having a hard time with the pacing of your story, I’m gonna recommend to try plotting it out. Plotting doesn’t have to be all that complicated at all! Basically, there are certain major points that need to happen in every story besides just beginning, middle, and…[Read more]

@ava-blue

Oohhh yes. I love these 🙂

This is a (semi generic) development template I was sent a while back, and the primary one I use now.

I do wish some of the ones I use now had more into their personality, like MBTI questions and such.

Hope this helps!

@joy-caroline

Aw, you’re super welcome!!! I’m so glad I was able to help!💗 And, YAY, I’m so happy to hear you love your new chapters now!!!!

@lrose5

Also nice profile pic. 😂 *high fives*

@lrose5

AHOY THERE MATEY!!!!!!!

*waves excitedly* It’s SOOO exciting to see you’ve joined the Kingdom, Rylie!!!! *jumps up and down* I am so, so, so, so, so, so, so, sooooo happy you’re here!!!!!!!!! I’ve been like super inactive here lately, but I do hope to get back to hanging on the forum. But I see everyone else has already given you a warm…[Read more]

@annabethkatherinewingfeather

Ah historical fiction is one of my absolute FAVORITE genres, so I’m more than happy to provide a few recs. 🙂

Within These Lines by Stephanie Morrill. It’s a book set in the USA in World War II about the Japanese internment camps. It’s a really emotional and touching/moving story and I can’t recommend it…[Read more]

@joy-caroline Yes, definitely! My opening chapters often feel flat. I write things that happen to the characters and that I think are important, only to figure out later that it wasn’t really important or added anything to the overall story. Sometimes my opening chapters drag on, and I decide that I need to move into the plot quicker or make the…[Read more]

@lewilliams Hey! I just now saw your message to me. I seriously have no idea how I missed it. XD But anyway, to answer your question, I’m actually not on YDubs, but I do have friends who are on it.

@unsung

Ah, yes I am an editor for Elfwing’s book! I believe I know who you are!😀 What a small world we live in. XDD

Oooh, I love “The God Who Stays”!!!!!!!! 😀 That’s such a great song!!!!! Matthew West’s song, “Mended” is another one of his that I love! Music without words is really pretty!!! And Irish-type music is awesome!!!!! I’ve never…[Read more]