Grace W.

I made a little progress with my poetry editing, @winter-rose , and I’m going to stop for now. How did you do?

Awesome! @winter-rose , I’m going to write for about 30 minutes. 🙂

I’m going to do a little writing/editing. Do any of you want to join me? @daeus @winter-rose @dragon-snapper @kate-flournoy @bluejay , anyone? 🙂

Thanks, @aratrea ! I’ll do that. 🙂

Thanks, @winter-rose . I think you’re right. 🙂

Those are good ideas, @ingridrd ! I’ll definitely give them and try and see. Thanks! 🙂

Anyone want to write with me for 25 minutes? @dragon-snapper ? Anyone?

I might be doing some writing an hour or two from now.

I can’t find the worksheet for lesson four, @aratrea . Isn’t there supposed to be a link or something below the video? Thanks!

Thanks, @kate-flournoy . 🙂

Sticking with one rhythm is a good idea, but I probably won’t be able to rewrite it that completely. :/ Still, I’ll see what I can do. 🙂

In a way, three stanzas that each have their own rhythm is a type of rhythm if they have a connection. Maybe if I tweak them a bit it’ll fix the flow problem.

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Thanks, @dragon-snapper ! I’m glad you liked it. 🙂

@winter-rose , what about that last verse doesn’t work for you? Do you think it’s disjointed?

Hmm … they are a bit on the bumpy side, @daeus . Do you think they could be tweaked and made better? If you have any thoughts on that I’d appreciate it. The hardest part for me when it comes to…[Read more]

Thanks, @dragon-snapper ! I’m glad you liked it. 🙂

Good point, @winter-rose , I’ll keep that in mind.

Hmm … they are a bit on the bumpy side, @daeus . Do you think they could be tweaked and made better? If you have any thoughts on that I’d appreciate it. The hardest part for me when it comes to editing poems … is editing.

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I’m hoping to gain some writing insight that will help me with my story planning. 🙂

I think theme is exciting because it takes a vague idea for a story helps me shape it into something I don’t just want to write because it’s interesting, but need to write because it matters to me. Theme helps me come up with a message for my story, and goals for my characters.

I missed it. 😛

@ethryndal

Yeah, you’re right. 🙂 I’ll probably work on it on and off for a little bit.

@daeus

Yeah, I think I might go back to the other style. Version 1.2.1 (the branch for 1.2 :P) I thought looked a little too plain. But hey! An artists’ work is never done, it’s only finished when he’s completely satisfied with it. ^_^