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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Grand Heartbreak in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 5 months ago
No worries! 😀
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Grand Heartbreak in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 5 months ago
The only one at the moment is a typo in the line, “…as the ground feel apart around her.”
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Grand Heartbreak in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 5 months ago
You’re welcome! 😀 I did see a few errors, and though normally I’m a picky beta-reader, especially with people I know/am more familiar with, I didn’t have the heart to be picky at the moment, plus I wanted to enjoy the story without interrupting myself in making notes about edits 😉 😀
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Grand Heartbreak in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 5 months ago
You’re welcome! 😀 I did see a few errors, and though normally I’m a picky beta-reader, especially with people I know/am more familiar with, I didn’t have the heart to be picky at the moment, plus I want to enjoy the story without interrupting myself in making notes about edits 😉 😀
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Beginners' Tips For Writing Science Fiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
Hey @emily-d ,
No, I haven’t read the Winds of Light books, but they look interesting. 🙂 Have you read any of Chuck Black’s other works?
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
XD
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Grand Heartbreak in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 5 months ago
Wow, that was amazing! I have often seen this prompt around, but I’d never given it a try. If I did, I don’t see how I can top this!
Very well done! 😀
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
@dragon-snapper Yes, Calvin and Hobbes is great!
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 5 months ago
@dragon-snapper Awwwwwwe 😀 😛
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Beginners' Tips For Writing Science Fiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
Some Christian sci-fi books I can personally recommend are The Robot Wars series by Sigmund Brouwer, and Cloak of the Light by Chuck Black.
I don’t really have any tips that I can think of, @emily-d …
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@JaynieCatgirl08 They are anyway, whether or not they jump at a cucumber or not 😉 😛
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
That’s great, @dragon-snapper . 🙂 I think lunch ic calling my name also …
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
I’m wrapping it up for now, @dragon-snapper . I wrote some more for one of K.P.’s prompts, which was really fun. 🙂
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Okay, @daeus . Nice writing with you! 🙂
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
You too, @dragon-snapper ! 🙂 Sorry for disappearing for so long.
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Awesome! 🙂 It’s been a long time, @dragon-snapper
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
Nice avatar, @that_writer_girl_99 . 🙂
I’m going to write for 30 minutes if anyone wants to join me.
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Leumeister replied to the topic My Take on Cliches in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
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Leumeister replied to the topic Beginners' Tips For Writing Science Fiction in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
You’re welcome. 🙂 I’d love to give you more tips if you need them. What did you think about that speed of light acceleration thing? Pretty foreign to what we see in the media, huh?
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 6 months ago
@emily-d Lol, you’re welcome 😉 It was annoying me, for sure, because I never knew if people were tagging me or not 😀
@JaynieCatgirl08 lol, I think my dad tried it once and it didn’t work either. It could be that cats think the cucumbers are snakes, and as far as I’m aware, our cats have never seen a snake.
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