Reagan Ramm

@rochellaine AH! I love the plotline. I really want to know what happens. Like really. Write more now.

The only things I think you need to do is add some paragraph breaks–those make it easier to read. And try to use the word ‘so’ less. It’s alright to use it with this guys style, but a bit less would be better.

It’s also a bit fast-paced. If…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 I haven’t really read modern dystopia, but I do get the impression that it has lost something it used to have. Namely, all the early dystopias were prophesies. The authors looked at the culture around them and, knowing what they did of mankind, civilization, and technology, they constructed a model of the future that they thought was…[Read more]

@rochellaine  I like it! I love how casual the narrator sounds. Except he sounds a little too bumbly to me. It’s an interesting story, but I think I would cut out some of the “bumbling” if you know what I mean. That would make it much more interesting in my opinion. But then again, I personally favor action. What can I say? *shrug*

Anyway, I…[Read more]

@clairec  Hehe, do you like biology? I think it’s cool! What have you dissected?

@waterlily  Haha, that’s perfect! I might use that… Ohh, unless you’re already using it, which is fine XD

@clairec  She said she did it when she was eight or something, so I doubt it

*looks at fish brain picture*  Eww…..  Cooooooooooll

(I like biology XP )

@rochellaine  Oh, that’s funny!! Good signature choice! 😉

@mnvalentine  Okay! I’ll write an article!! Not sure about the book though XD

@jenwriter17 Ha. I actually have a KP Cinema video about cliches in dystopian novels coming out sometime this month. xD So a lot of my “advice” would be in there. I wouldn’t say oppressive governments are cliched because they’re required for that genre, but I would recommend studying classic dystopias like Animal Farm, Fahrenheit 451, Brave New…[Read more]

@clairec  LOL @jane-maree Also kissed a frog, I think

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A heartless queen of hearts. Haha!

@rochellaine  Yeah, can you just tell me? I’m too impatient to read the whole thing XD

@rochellaine  Kevin looks fine! And yeah, I like Dekreel’s hair (except his beard isn’t actually that thick, but eh)

BTW what does your signature mean? It’s funny! 🙂

@rochellaine  Ooh! Those are cool! Thank you!! I especially like Kevin! 😀

@mnvalentine  Ohh, I should have thought about writing an article! Wow, I should!

A BOOK?! Ooooh, mayyyyyyybe when I have learned more about it X’D

@ingridrd  Awwwww! GAH! They’re awesome!! <3  Thank you so much!! 😀

@that_writer_girl_99  Alrighty! I’m on it!

Ohh, that’s long O_O Sorry!