Rattie

*coughs* I totally didn’t talk in a British accent while I wrote that

I kind of have a habit of trying to sound like the character when I write their dialogue

This is why at random parts of the day I sound like Yelena, Wanda, Pietro, and Natasha

@freedomwriter76

I’m good with it, but I’m going to quickly redo Anna’s RP (I would like to change what she said XD)

Anna

“I suppose that’s a harder question than I originally thought. I would say my bedroom, but I have to share it with both of my brothers, so maybe…ah, I know. My favorite room is the painting room.”

Anna figured out a few thi…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Okay so I just read all Reubin and then Wolfgang and then finally Felix’s board

And these poor, poor, poor, broken bois!!!!

Why?!!!!!!! *sobs*

The ‘I already died’ quote 😭

I know!!! I have quotes like that in my boards

and it’s such a sad reality for some, that they get to the point where they feel that they no longer are tru…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Haha, okay then XD I guess you can have Jakob (but i believe @euodia-vis has claimed Joshua, lol!)

Yayy, and I’m not shocked, we just like to claim your charries

Aww, that makes me sooo happy!!! (i feel like Jakob is overlooked😭)

You can always count on me to like the overlooked characters XD

i understand completely…I do love J…

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@freedomwriter76

So uh, Jakob is mine!!! Like how rueben is Min’s

I love him, like a lot!!!

But to be fair I love them all, just Jakob a little more

@freedomwriter76

Perfect thank you

@freedomwriter76

Awwww Riker!! He’s such a good older brother

And Joshua!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love him ❤️

And please tell me more!!

@everyone

I’m going to introduce them

Eleanor 

Her brown hair was styled in delicate curls that were pinned to the side of her head. She wore a knee-length floral patterned dress and a brown bag of all her belongings.

She glanced around the busy and crowded school, she could feel her back tense up. She ached with nervousness, but she hid it…[Read more]

(oh, and for when you edit, I just wanted to let you know that WWI was called the “Great War” until the years after WWII 😊 i didn’t know that for a long time, lol! XD)

I did not know that, thanks!!

@freedomwriter76

*Sobs* Leo!!!! why would you do this to him?!

And ooohhhh I like her, wait did she get abused by Riker’s father?

And I don’t think all three of them at once would make a lot of sense since they don’t know each other or anything

@calyhuge

Okay sorry XD Um… yeah I could see Marek and Eleanor getting into a fight, but like Loopy they would have to be tempted a lot

But Eleanor would have to be tempted less, Marek you’d have to punch him or hurt somebody else before he’ll get involved

Eleanor it would have to be hurting someone else or trying to touch her in a violent…[Read more]

@anyone interested

I have Marek’s first scene (he’ll most likely not start the book but this is like his first POV)

and it also is pretty rough (but it’s the first draft and I’m trying to not edit too much)

Bullets, bombings, and the very soldiers who had helped him were lying pale on the ground next to him. 

Marek had never felt so very…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

*Me having no clue who this guy is yet crying anyway* I love it!!!

@freedomwriter76

excuse me as I go cry again for Marek, that’s so good!!!! And I kind of wrote something similar

because I was thinking that Marek would make friends with Pierre (a younger French soldier, who we really don’t see) and then when Marek gets to France he has to be the one to tell Pierre family what happened and it’s kind of just…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

(also, may be unnecessary info, but Jakob is also the tallest of the Bois, standing at 6’4″ XD legit a giant😂)

Well tall guys are the best so XD

(i can totally go more in-depth about the others too if you wanted…🤭XD)

Yessssss please do!!!!!!

Have you possibly considered showing what Marek did/went through by showing it throu…

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Also I’m really struggling to start my book (yes it’s going to be a book now) because I’m doing four different POVs

I know it’s a lot, but I’ve done it before and there’s really no other way to do it

but I don’t know what POV to start with, and if I’ll will just skip through time instead of doing a really long Proluege, like starting with Marek…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

it’s such a contradiction

But honestly, that’s such a good thing

(and since we use Marvel examples so much, here’s mine.) like how Wanda & Pietro want revenge on the Avenger (mostly Tony) but we also see in the deleted scene (why they had to delete them I don’t know) that they really do care for people

so while some characters a…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

He wants them to die.

Even if it’s by his own hands.

(but don’t get me wrong, Jakob can be very sweet too.

Okay so not going to lie, I may or may not laughed here, because we went from the want to murder to the fact that he’s all really sweet and it just (it’s very tragic but still there was a part of amusement there)

But no!…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Okay so I’ve heard a little but of all these characters but I really don’t know them too well

And for some reason Jakobhaa peaked my curiosity so please tell me all about him and his brothers