Ruth

@smiley (Sure, go right ahead!) @euodia-vision @freedomwriter76

Who’s going to write the next RP? (I think I went last)

@smiley

Awesome, thanks!

Ev

“But as long as I can see the perfect red dress and suit, we should be good,” Falon said.

“Sounds good to me,” Ev said with a nod. “Even though an invisible mall would be pretty cool,” he a…[Read more]

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I really like it so far!! Be sure to tag me when you post new parts.

I don’t think I have anything different to add to what the others have said.

I’m really looking forward to seeing more of the world though, because my NaNo WIP takes place in an Arabian/Persian-ish country, with the whole desert vibe, and that’s what I’m getting from th…[Read more]

@rae

Okay. Yeah, I also usually use Word too, but google docs seems to be easier to share.

@rae

Oh my gosh I love your signature, I might want to copy you, lol

@rae

It might be that images are not working right now. You could stick it in the google doc.

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NO plan is the BEST plan, obviously!

@rae

 Do you want to go out dragon slaying without any clue whatsoever?

YEAH! LET’S DO IT!!

jk lol

@rae

Scouting missions are essential to any military campaign.

True, but this isn’t exactly a military campaign. They can’t send scouts all the way to all the locations.

@rae

Maybe we should have a map? Or can you at least give us some locations that are on it for some reference?

@rae

Yeah that’s helpful. I guess the other thing is, are they sending Lillenings out as scouts, or trying to do the scouting themselves? The first option is probably going to be easiest and quickest.

@rae @esther-c @trailblazer

Okay. Someone else can start, cause I don’t know what to do. I think the last one was a Kari POV. If you need to reference it, you should be able to find it in the doc.

@rae @savannah_grace2009

Callista

“No, I just got here. Is there a place to go check in or something? I thought there would be more people around…where is everyone?”

Callista chuckled. “Um… I’m not sure if there’s a place to check in or not. But I have room in my dorm if you want to come stay with me. As for where everyone is… I’m not entirel…[Read more]

@everyone

This seems like a good place to end the villains’ scene, unless anyone wants to do anything still.

@rae @trailblazer @esther-c

Do you want to go back to Nora, Kari, Kate, and Amir planning the scouting missions?

@rae

Nice! I really like it!

I agree with what everyone else has said, especially that there were a lot of run-on sentences. But overall, it’s really great so far!

@rae

Those are both amazing! (Sorry I missed the one you posted a few days ago, I don’t have notifics activated so I’m likely to miss tags unless it’s something I check on often)

I love this line:

But the hero is the one who bleeds,

Red drops that fall like planter’s seeds.

Great job with both of them!

@rae

I really liked it!

Everyone else already mentioned the main thing I noticed, which was everything was a little confusing. There were a lot of run-on sentences that had so much action and I was unable to keep track of who was doing what. 😅 But besides that I thought it was really good and I am very intrigued.

@rae

I like it too! I did notice it was a little confusing like the others said, but it sounds like you’ve got that covered!

@savannah_grace2009

I like those scenes!

@rae

Nooo! 😭😭😭😭

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😭😭😭😭😭😫😫😫😫😖😖😖😭😭😖

@rae

i love that scene!!!!!!!