Ruth

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Sef

“I-I think so?” Sef breathed, relieved that Chase didn’t ridicule her for being so ignorant of how to dance.

Finally the two found a pattern and Chase helped Sef when she messed up, which Sef was grateful for. Dancing wasn’t as bad as she thought it would be, and she felt herself beginning to relax.

Suddenly she felt his eyes on her…[Read more]

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Sef

She flinched as he touched her. She didn’t like to be touched. But his touch was gentle, soft, comforting, almost. She caught sight of his scarred hands and felt a pang of…what was it? Sympathy? She knew what it felt like to have maps of pain carved into your skin to be remembered for eternity.

“I-I’m not sure h-how t-to dance,” she…[Read more]

@esther-c

Aww…Lukas has a crush! <333 (so does Liv…lol)

Livia 

“Are you sure? You can tell me anything,” Liv smiled back.

(Sorry I didn’t know what else to have her say, lol)

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Sef

She didn’t know where she was. All she knew was that she wanted to leave.

All around her people were dancing in pairs.

“Excuse me, miss,” a woman…[Read more]

@rae

Uh oh

@rae

Oh no.

@rae

Oh no… lol

@rae

Ummm…OF COURSE!!! I THOUGHT YOU’D NEVER ASK!!! lol

Should I have her randomly appear in the dance class and be paired with Chase since he’s not dancing with anyone?

@rae @grcr

lol haha I’m on. ;D

I’m just gonna do this:

@rae @highscribeofaetherium@grcr @beth-torres @whalekeeper@esther-c @hybridlore@savannah_grace2009 @acancello@loopylin @princesachronicle22@thearcaneaxiom We’re almost to 13, come and help us if you can!!! (I am aware a lot of you are already on, but I just copied it.)

@rae fair point.

still, I feel like we’re building up to that point. I know from experience that having too many “underdog” moments ruins what would otherwise be a good story. When Black Sky finally attacks, that will certainly be like Sauron’s forces or the Empire appearing. If we’re going to have this moment be an “oh no we’re outnumbered and…[Read more]

@rae Yep, but three dragons and only Nahim and Snake to fight them while they and the others are under attack still seems a bit unfair…..

@rae no, not at the moment.

@rae

Wow, ten ppl are on rn?

@beth-torres

I have a villain that isn’t doing anything right now, but he avoids fighting as much as he can and would especially avoid attacking someone like Carrie, unless she were for some reason to attack him first. @rae also could bring in Jeptune, and @highscribeofaetherium has the Shadow, but I can’t think of any others that aren’t alrea…[Read more]

@rae

I may answer all your questions later, but for now, I am drawn into the story.

Alrighty, awesome! 👍

I see potential for this story to be better if you had at least one chapter before this that introduced us to daily life with the Orb. It would drawn me in more, and make us care about Ev and Ami more than just plopping them and the plot in our…

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@loopylin

XD Sorrryyyyy

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Hugo

“I wish. Unfortunately my baby brother? Seb? He was the second to discover how people change. It depends on your long-term mental state, not whatever you want. And most of the time, these changes slowly intensify your worst beliefs… To use his words.”

They stood still now. Hugo hooked his thumbs in his…[Read more]

@rae @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @beth-torres @whalekeeper @esther-c @hybridlore @savannah_grace2009 @acancello @loopylin @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom

Reminder! We’re planning to smash that record into the dust at 5 EST/4 CST/3 MST/2 PST.

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Hugo

Realn sounded like a fairy story.

“…Here I am talking so much! What of your culture?” Nar laughed, her curls thrown around her face, like a windswept flower.

She looked like a fairy too. Just a little.

“My culture?” Hugo blinked, and hesitated. “Um… let’s see.”

Nar probably thought he was looking for words. She stared up at him…[Read more]