@rae
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Got it
Lucille
Lucy traced over them. They felt rougher than they looked, somewhat like her father’s. She bent his hands into fists and out again, folded them together, and briefly pretended his fingers were keys and she was playing the piano.
It was the kind of game that made no sense but relaxed her. She did it for a little while until…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Lucille
“My parents.” Lucy glanced at different sights in front of them, not letting her eyes stay in one place for long. For a long time, her eyelids flickered and she said nothing. She didn’t look at the Protector but she reached out again. “May I look at your hands?” -
whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
We’re magically cooperating here, passing the baton back and forth
Except when I’m stuck for no reason and leave you hanging for twelve hours. XD
That’s rping for ya
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
He rarely spills out his thoughts though, so this is nice.
Yeah I think it’s nice. As someone with confusing thoughts, I think his thoughts make sense. It’s characterization too.
Lucille
“I-I’m bothered. I don’t like screaming and crying in front of people, s’all. I’m ugly when I cry.” Lucy stopped smiling and swung back to the top of the…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy looked from the Protector to the fruit and back again. She shrugged and slowly smiled, the first time that day.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
You’re good!
Lucille
“Right ‘ere!” Lucy dangled upside down from a wall. She shut the photo album and, after realizing it wouldn’t stay in her pocket, dropped it on the ground below. “How’d your sleep-in shift fare you?”
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 3 weeks ago
A new part of his character design. I decided that I’d lean into his artificial voicebox a little more, so that’s what happened. I tried to make them look like artificial, metal muscles in the neck, not sure if I succeeded at all.
Ohhh makes sense! Yeah that’s exactly what it looks like.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Lucille
It was easier to reach the trees from the wall. Lucy hiked up her trousers and placed a foot on a protruding root. She swiftly climbed up the wall and crouched on the top. The mist fell away, although the sky remained a bright, sharp gray. The sun, a blurred disk, lay on the horizon. Walls and rolls of twisted plant life sprawled…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
He wasn’t sure what it was, but it compelled him to keep her safe, not from duty, but for the sake of doing so
Aw. Dude, you’re very kind but you need a long nap.
Whatever you want to do from here is fine with me. We probably should have Lucy do some stuff from here, then skip to whenever Gabriel wakes up, however long or short that is. Idk…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 3 weeks ago
ugh that’s kind of annoying! Nothing beats skill though : )
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 3 weeks ago
aw man that sucks! That’s actually so similar to a game I’m playing called Genshin impact. It’s a gacha game, so you use in game currency to ‘wish’ (Otherwise known as gambling lol) on banners that have chances of giving in game characters. You can be F2p like me and still get through the game but getting the in game currency takes a lot…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Lucille
“We should sit.” Lucy would feel better if he didn’t accidentally fall on her. She caught a glimpse of what was ahead and walked faster.
The path widened and turned into something else entirely. The labyrinth cleared around a circular crater in the earth, with rings of stone as steps or seats. It was an empty amphitheater. The s…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Good
Lucille
Lucy had seen a dead body before. She almost spoke up to that effect, but found that her teeth were chattering. “I – hm. That is probably correct.”
She awkwardly shuffled around to face away, covered her eyes with one hand, and took the Protector’s hand with the other.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
That makes sense….
I must edit my tip. You will not lose your writing nearly as often. You can still lose it if you write in the email drafts while your wifi isn’t working. …Speaking from recent experience.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy let her breath out and approached. She toed the beast’s foot, jumping back when the claws clicked together. She looked up at the Protector and nodded.
The young man’s chest heaved in exhaustion, but he wasn’t hurt. The rip in his shirt held no trace of blood. He adjusted his grip on his blades and wiped them across the moss…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
I write an entire long rp, and then KP signs me out as I post it 😭
Pro tip – if I think KP might glitch, or if my post will be of substantial length, I write it in an email draft. That way I can copy-paste instead of rewrite.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 3 weeks ago
what? Paying just to change your name? That should be free!
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Lucille
The beast’s black tail stretched longer than its body and floated over the ground with stunning flexibility. It whipped through the mist again, sending a shower of leaves into the air. A gash was rent through a wall. The Protector glanced back at Lucy with the realization that the tail struck against stone, mere feet from Lucy’s arm…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@rae just noticed, no way you changed your name to cranberry sauce just for thanksgiving 😭😭
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy nodded.
The Protector tensed. He was right to, as soft thumps sounded ahead of them, far along the next section. Something dark sliced through the mist. It was too far away to see clearly but it was something long and flexible, like a whip.
The clicks had grown louder, but they suddenly stopped along with the footfalls. The…[Read more]
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