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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Time can pass while she’s in bed and Gabriel can do whatever he wants
Lucille
The warm mattress and sheets felt familiar and alien at once, after so much walking and uncertainty. Lucy rolled over a few times and held her face into her arms. The soft warmth held her above and pushed her adrift, so everything left her be.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy rubbed her knuckles into her eyes and then against the wall, unable to push the haze out of her head. This wasn’t the time to be tired. They had to get out, they had to keep walking.
She tried to voice her frustrations, but her words turned into a high-pitched groan. She took a step and stumbled into Gabriel’s arms where he knelt.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
That second to last paragraph was really good, I like the way you wrote it.
Lucille
Lucy dropped the hatchet on the floor and walked several paces, realizing that it wouldn’t be too good to fall on it. A kid in the east fields had fallen on his father’s ax two years ago and there had been many cautionary stories before that.
She slid to…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Violent of the “kill everything” type.
XD Oh Gabriel, you force of nature
Lucille
Lucy peered out the window at the crows. “They’re real handsome birds when they’re not so close up.”
She eyed the room’s mantelpiece noticing a handle sticking from the ornate wood. It was a small silver hatchet. Without hesitation, she yanked it free of it…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@rae ooooh Snipes and Gabriel will be something for sure lol
hopefully Gabriel won’t think Soldier (and maybe Sniper too?) is one of those monsters he fights at home or another giant crow.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@loopylin I’d be good with that. My characters might not though, they’ll be super confused.
@rae @whalekeeper if Loopy pulls her charries, you mind if my three join your party?
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Loopy replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
suspecting the owner of the labyrinth might be in the house.
Not that your characters would know this, but, just clarifying, the labyrinth doesn’t have an owner. It’s sort of sentient on its own, kinda, and more like a force of nature than anything else.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy did as she was told and more; she slid every candle into her trouser belt and pockets. The flames flickered around her waist like a burner under a pan and she hissed with restrained laughter.
The poem didn’t make much sense. Was it about people who had already escaped? Had they died? She recognized Gabriel’s title, but the res…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
My hand is fine now. I was rather miffed because I burnt my hand yesterday too, pulling steak out of the oven. It’s never bad burn, just painful for ten minutes or so.
Baking is indeed fun and time-consuming
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
For the first time, Lucy’s face flushed. Gabriel knew she was young, but he didn’t know that while she was a good silent reader, she did not read aloud to people. She put the book on the table and squinted in the candlelight. She stuttered but got through it.
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Here we have our victims
Here we have them all
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Sorry about the wait! I spent the afternoon whisking masa, cooking meat, burning my hand on a kettle, etc. Lots of cooking. And I felt I should update the school roleplay first if I had free time.
Make something up
Alright! I had an idea, just give me two shakes
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Is there something you want the book to lead up to, or should I make something up?
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy picked up one of the candles. She tried blowing it out, then brought it to her nose and sniffed it curiously. It didn’t smell like anything. But it could be useful if they brought it with them.
On the one hand, the room disquieted both of them, but at least every element was familiar. Lucy even recognized the crochet pattern i…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Should I add Chase to our merry little band?
You can do that if you want! As long as you can handle the two of them lol
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Plus Tenz has healing abilities, and that may be needed the way this rp is going.
*British sniff.* I take offense.
😂
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@rae looks great!!
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@rae yeah, a bit now that you point it out. Wouldn’t have noticed that on my own, though.
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Loopy replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@rae Nice! Some good ol’ angst art. His proportions and hair look really good!
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
“Hm.” Lucy was still thinking about Gabriel’s previous words. Maybe their homes were near each other; after all, Lucy couldn’t leave her city either. “I… No. Didn’t see anything.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Lucille
“That’s nicer than being called Fifth at your christening.” Lucy glanced at him. “That’s my ma’s name too. Gabriella, I mean. It’s the prettiest name I know.”
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