Ruth

@rae

It’s good! It gives a very clear picture of what’s happening, and how guilty Nahim is, while also confirming that the author knows it isn’t Nahim’s fault. Gives a clear picture of how his mindset needs to change.

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Marcel

Alpha and Rax whispered a little, and didn’t notice Barnes heading for the door. “Since you are so eager to catch the bad guys,” she threw over her shoulder, “why don’t you lead me to the rest of them?”

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Since when are cows holy?

Since when they got a visit from the bishop… jk.

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Rax

“No need to be so concerned,” Rax laughed, “It’s just an expression. Now what’s our next move to deal with these ‘agents’ who keep terrorizing the school.”

@rae

I think it’s really good. The way you wrote it really feels close and suffocating, especially the first paragraph, which I think works really well.

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Rax

“Alright then, have a good day.” Rax leaned over to Alpha. “I think we are both going to be seeing a lot. Holy cow, she’s intense. She is even more intense than you, which is saying something, no offense.”

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Marcel

“There’s a difference between fighting for something important and looking for a fight. As for the pain part, you shouldn’t want to hurt anybody. That’s the difference between a hero and a sadist who coincidentally saves somebody.” She didn’t move, gauging their expressions.

@rae it’s all good, thank you!

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Rax and Ben

“But isn’t that what happens anyway, someone is going to be hurt whether you fight for good or bad. So if a fight comes to me, how much pain am I aloud to inflict?”

Ben punches Rax.

“It’s a valid question.”

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Marcel

“One, don’t go looking for fights; two, someone who is innocent might get hurt,” Barnes said. “You may leave now, but I want to see the kids who were being attacked as soon as possible.”

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Rax and Ben

Rax raises his hand. “Two questions. One, can you define “get along”? Two, what happens if we don’t?”

Ben raises his hand. “I second those questions.”

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Marcel

The woman nodded and turned her attention. “Did you see this happen, Marcel?”

The winged boy looked up at her incredulously. “You know who I am?”

“To make it easy: who among the catalog of students do you think I would know about the most?”

“Ha, okay… I didn’t see the fight happen. These guys…[Read more]

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Marcel

The tall woman looked at Alpha and Rax, who had stopped talking. Marcel could swear she raised an eyebrow under the mask. “Whichever one of you is Alpha Grath, please explain what happened.”

@jonas

I was planning on doing it here or making a new topic. The CP link is just for anyone who wants to see what it was like, since that’s where the idea comes from.

Ah, gotchya

@rae

For all the new ppl looking into Character Party, you should find the part where the castle was burning down, the queen was almost killed, the villains were r…

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@rae

Aaaaaaah! Why are so good at pulling on my heart strings. Good job!

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I see your conversation went on lol, I should have waited a little longer. Pretend the post I made before you actually happened now.

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Rax and Ben

“I don’t think I really know what you are talking about. I use heat energy yes, but I do not know what ‘at bay’ means. Do you mean by the seashore.”

Ben looked at Rax, “No, no, that is not what he means, he means how do you store your energy.”

“Oh, um, in my heart, I think. But I’m not too sure, could be in one of my kidneys…[Read more]

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Assuming everyone went downstairs

Marcel

Marcel sat down on the floor again, and crossed his arms on a coffee table, tucking his face into them.

The police began questioning the kids before they could get settled any longer. Those who were unassociated with the killing had been in class together. They…[Read more]

@rae

In Realn culture, you grab wrists, I think I showed you that before, so alpha should have accepted Rax’s hand anyways. He was just being purposefully rude for whatever reason.

I know, but Rax doesn’t know.

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Rax and Ben

“Does that- you know what, it probably does.” They need all the help they can get. <…[Read more]

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Leo

He sucked in a breath and nodded. “I know. I know. We’re going to get out of here as soon as Silvia gets cleaned up.”

He glanced at the bathroom door where his sister had disappeared. A minute passed. Distant voices echoed down from the fight scene, or whatever that was. Leo tensed. Sighed.…[Read more]