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Ellis

Ellis scrambled to his feet and grabbed the green stone off of the ground as Nahim tried to restrain Zash.

Ellus hesitated, not wanting to leave Nahim to fight alone, but then turned and ran. He had to get the stone to Fennin.

Zash

Zash managed to get some of his knives under the armored warrior pinning him down. With a heave, the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @lightoverdarkness6 @hybridlore @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @smiley @savannah_grace2009 @rae @grcr @anyone-else

Sooo… I was working on some “character-building” the past day or so, and I’ve fixed my MCs’ character arcs/internal conflicts to tie into the theme more and so I can write them better/more accurately. (With a l…[Read more]

@loopylin @rae

Okay… he’s in the shop next to the dancing building, literally next door. Just so you girls know. Cal saw it in his POV before coming in for practice. Not that anyone knows 😅

Calvin

“Spot on.” Calvin standing nearby snapped his fingers, and strode over to join the two girls and interrogate the nervous boy. “What’s your name?…[Read more]

@rae

but I guess Sef isn’t there so… Whatever.

Oop, sorry, I assumed they started to switch partners like everyone else

@whalekeeper

I think you’re writing her pretty well except she probably isn’t completely calm rn. But she would be pretending to be Babs’ sake, so nvm, it’s good.

Felicity

“Like… angsty depressed teens? Or people who pretend they aren’t depressed, but then you look at them and you can clearly see that they… Ohhh wait, I think I see one.”…[Read more]

@rae

The writing you shared was a little depressing, but the characters weren’t melodramatic at least. I don’t pay much attention to punctuation as a writing problem. The art of melodrama is at an all time high here though. Like “He grabbed Nejin by the collar of his shirt, his eyes radiating hate, and rage.” After Nejin, a little boy he never…[Read more]

@rae

oh my gosh….lol I was reading it and I was like, oh it’s really good! and then I read this sentence:

I can’t tell you what Nahim’s face looked like because he never showed it to anyone.

And then I laughed.

sorry if that sounds mean…..

And now for the worst thing I have ever written:

“It worked!” Jorryn cries.…

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@loopylin

Again, please tell me if I’m writing your character wrong, or you want something to play out differently.

Babs

Babs wiped at her eyes. “Okay…”

They decided to do a sweep around the room, one girl starting by the exits, the other by the entrance. But Babs knew dolefully, as she trudged off to her side, that she would have seen the Gua…[Read more]

@jonas  @highscribeofaetherium @rae

Well this escalated quickly…

@rae @esther-c

So who wants to do the prompt?

Riina is having too much fun right now (and I’m having too much fun RPing her.) she’s gonna get a bit over the top now!

@highscribeofaetherium @rae @loopylin

Riina

As Riina walked through the room, she noted with some dissatisfaction that nobody seemed properly awed by her presence. Nobody even seemed particularly impressed by her jumping aro…[Read more]

@loopylin @rae

Idk what else to do, so…

Saoirse

Saoirse stuck her hand in her pouch and pulled out a stone the size of a large egg before calmly leaning back against the wall. She didn’t want to waste the stone – she only had two more like it – but if she needed a quick and stealthy getaway, she would use it.

***

If she drops the stone, it…[Read more]

@rae @highscribeofaetherium @loopylin
Riina

“Now that was uncalled for!” Riina said indignantly. “I was talking to this crank!” She jabbed her thumb towards the guy who had come nosing around. “If you’re all gonna be like that, I’m outta here!” She opened a portal beneath her and vanished in the blink of an eye.

OH! And I have Hallie and Easton who I have not RPed for yet but will do so now…

…

Easton

“So, are you glad you came? You seem very confident with that waltz now.”

“Yep!” Hallie flashed him her signature smile. “I’m glad you came along.”

Easton bobbed his head in a small laugh. “Anytime. But…” he peered over the heads of students. “Looks lik…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ooh, I love it. 😁 I love dogs too. 😝

@rae

Nahimmmm!!! 😭

@rae

Riina was talking to Mr. Gregory, not Junior.

@rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @freedomwriter76 @esther-c @thearcaneaxiom

GUYS WE SHOULD BRING THIS BACK!!!

@loopylin @rae @highscribeofaetherium

Riina

“Don’t even try it, pal,” Riina told the man. “You can’t catch me and I don’t think you want this to get messy.”

@rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium

Mr. Gregory 

Several suspicious looking students stood at the edge of the dance room, talking amongst each other. Gregory’s eyes narrowed at the sight of their illegal footwear. He strode over, hands clasped behind his back, and cleared his throat loudly. They turned. He towered over most of them, but the bo…[Read more]