Ruth

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The demon has a physical body it stole from something else. Technically it is a spirit, but if its body is attacked enough, it will probably retreat, as it sees its body as a rare asset and doesn’t want to lose it.

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Omniscient (Because I suck at writing action off a watching character’s POV)

The dem…[Read more]

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Saoirse

“Excuse me, I’ll be right back.” Saoirse said to Vlydia, before stalking over to the knife-guy. “Do you want something, or are you just showing off?” She demanded, eyes flaring with light.

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@jonas apologies for abandoning Vlydia lol. Saoirse will come back, though.

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I made some memes…

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Sorry I’ve been MIA this week! I’m back now!

And yes, I think something needs to change. As sad as I am to see it happen, I think it’s for the best. I think the best option for me would be to stick around with whoever reverts back to the party as it was in the first place. I’ve…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

*Listens to Mr. Blue Sky while writing my dramatic scene*

*is now stuck in my head* One of my favorite movie tropes is when they play a super happy, popular song over a intense fight scene, though, hehe

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Felicity

Chaos erupted in the fortune teller’s shop. The portal girl and Chase attacked. They w…[Read more]

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Rina

As a black, masked thing came towards her, Rina dropped through a portal. Her gravity switched as she came out, but her momentum carried her on, feet-first towards the demon’s back.

“Nice try, sucker!” she shouted.

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@whalekeeper

I left it there because I don’t know what would…[Read more]

@rae

Ooh, does Chase always have black scales/fur/whatever when he transforms? Or is it more of a whim?

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Calvin

The boy Guardian was in a demon’s vice-like grip.

Almost instantly, Chase and the new girl reacted. The first transformed into a scaly black snake, hissing a warning in the demon’s face, while the other teleported and threatened with a sword.

Babs only stepped closer and begged, “You’re hurting…[Read more]

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Rina

“Hmm… this is getting interesting,” said Rina as a boy turned into a giant snake and slithered towards the creepy black thing inside.

Rina dropped through a portal and landed in the room behind it. Another portal opened and her sword leapt into her hand. She pointed it at the demon’s back an…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Aww, thanks!

And you’re not hogging the spotlight either, you’re just giving us more options for what we do with our characters. (Writing romance and people dancing is hardd)

@rae

Yeah, that happens too. Idk, I cry with Alpha when he looses Emmie, reject Gloria with Glace when he was banished, I’m shocked with Nahim when he di…

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Oh, sorry, tags @loopylin @rae @savannah_grace2009 @jonas do with this scene what you wish XD

@jonas

I love Rina XD She’s so energetic and funny. Her powers perfectly complement that.

@rae

You’re all good! Feeling emotions through your characters is certainly enjoyable. I don’t always feel it myself in the moment of writing, but it’s always cool when I do.

@loopylin

You’re not hogging the spotlight! If anyone is, it’s me, because [Read more]

@rae

Maybe I wasn’t clear. It isn’t a bad thing that it’s simple. It’s that you spend so much time at the beginning setting things up, which seems overly complicated compared to your central idea. Sorry if that was confusing.

@rae

Really interesting! Would this be the entire plot of the short story? The biggest problem I see is that the plot is quite simple, but it takes quite a long time to set it up. Have you considered using this in a full length book? I think it could make a very interesting character backstory. Otherwise, I’m sure you could make a good short s…[Read more]

@rae

Ooh, that sounds really neat, I’d definitely read something like this! I can’t think of any feedback to give rn. But yeah, I love the idea! Tag me if you end up posting it!

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Felicity

Felicity’s eyes widened as the girl summoned a knife and slashed through the latch.

“Or, yeah, vandalism is also an option,” she said.

(I’ll let someone else answer Rina and Chase’s questions so that Fel isn’t hogging the spotlight or anything)

@rae ahh, cool

@rae Oh wow, Chase’s powers are cool :0

@rae Usually my problems become my charries’ problems, not the other way around lol

@rae Snake people AND people that can turn into snakes? That’s cool, are the two species related?