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Marcel — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara, Leon, Julian, Baron, Marcellus, Ben Gunn, Flare)

Marcel backed up a little, and the others in his group stepped forward. “Maybe there is nothing for it but to move on, find another city.”

@hybridlore

Wonderful. Glad it’s good.

I’ll take a look at the letter. Thanks! And yeah, I did a typo comb today. There were a lot. (yikes)

@ellette-giselle Ok, I read it! I missed Adrian’s reintro, somehow. Sorry.

I’ll thrash a teenager any day, (particularly a guy. They can take it) but little kids……… Oh well. It’s for the good of the book, and may be for his good too.

Only thing I really noticed about that scene was some typos—and in Aaron’s letter, he repeats “Joseph” over a…[Read more]

@hybridlore

That makes more sense. The last scene Joseph was terrified of Adrien. So, yeah, this scene is much sweeter. lol.

@ellette-giselle The one you just sent… I think 😅 I guess I missed the other scene.

@hybridlore

 

Weirdly it’s sending a lot of your posts twice 🤔

I know! I don’t know why it keeps doing that. Grrr.

Such a cute scene with Joseph & Adrian!!

Aw! Thanks! Which scene were you referring too? The last one, or the one I just posted?

@hybridlore

Thanks!! 😄

@grcr Aw, love it!!

@ellette-giselle

Weirdly it’s sending a lot of your posts twice 🤔

Such a cute scene with Joseph & Adrian!!

I’m bored… so here’s this cuz why not.

board for the antagonist of my main series and protagonist of his own novel, my beloved Sulfur…

@linus-smallprint  @keilah-h @hybridlore

“Joseph!” Asher yelled.

Joseph spun toward his friend and saw the ball in his hand. “Throw it!” he shouted, running several paces backwards.

Asher threw the ball and Joseph caught it. Eric came racing out of the house, whooping in the afternoon sunshine.

The days were growing warmer, and with the spri…

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@linus-smallprint  @keilah-h @hybridlore

“Joseph!” Asher yelled.

Joseph spun toward his friend and saw the ball in his hand. “Throw it!” he shouted, running several paces backwards.

Asher threw the ball and Joseph caught it. Eric came racing out of the house, whooping in the afternoon sunshine.

The days were growing warmer, and with the spri…

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@power

You are nuts.

Plain and simple.

@linus-smallprint @keilah-h

Thanks y’all! This was so great to come home to!

I’m glad y’all liked Adrian’s reintroduction! It’s one of my favorite scenes.

Ah, thanks Linus for the typo catches.

There we go, there is that Ardenta mistrust appearing.

Yes. Glad you caught that! Not only is the poor kid traumatized by soldiers, (as alluded to in…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

AHHHH!!!!! LOVE THIS!!! I think this is gonna be my favorite book yet!!!

As for the PTSD triggers, if you could list all the triggers under the names of the two guys, i can help you try to brainstorm ways they would avoid them. At the moment, I’m not sure which triggers they would be. I mean, for some soldiers after war,…[Read more]

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Leon — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara, Marcel, Julian, Baron, Marcellus, Ben Gunn, Flare)

Leon shook Marcel’s hand firmly. “No, I was hoping you did. My friend and I slipped through the gates while the guards were preoccupied with something, we met Brutus already in the c…[Read more]

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Leon — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara, Marcel, Julian, Baron, Marcellus, Ben Gunn, Flare)

Leon shook Marcel’s hand firmly. “No, I was hoping you did. My friend and I slipped through the gates while the guards were preoccupied with something, we met Brutus already in the c…[Read more]

Leon — Elderstrand (w/Ellis, Fel, Sara, Marcel, Julian, Baron, Marcellus, Ben Gunn, Flare)

Leon shook Marcel’s hand firmly. “No, I was hoping you did. My friend and I slipped through the gates while the guards were preoccupied with something, we met Brutus already in the city, and Ben and Flare fell off the roof on us. Then our newest c…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle I echo Linus’s statement–this was a great way to re-introduce Adrian to the narrative!

@power I had a song on in the background that started epic then turned really goofy as I read your little poem and it was perfect for it lolllll

thing is, it was by complete coincidence.

@freed_and_redeemed oooh nice scene!!