Ruth

@linus-smallprint

“The perfect GIF doesn’t exi-”

That part is so funny, I adore the arm wiggles 😂

@linus-smallprint

Yeah I guessed that was an accidental tag

@linus-smallprint

I changed it a couple days ago to my favorite short :p

Ikr? Alan and his team are amazing.

All of them!

… ok fine, Purple, followed by King Orange and Green.

@linus-smallprint

Aaahh the Link drawing! 🤣🤣

@linus-smallprint

I am very much behind, but reading the rest of it all at once will give me an idea of your pacing, too. Will get to it soon and will give feedback!

The question you accused of being AI generated may be the only one on there that is not.

Bruuuhhh

@ellette-giselle ahhh ok

@rae

I immediately thought of Marlo and Oakley. :]

@keilah-h

I was mostly joking.

I know, but my questions came from my own head. XD

@ellette-giselle Not sure why you’re so horrified, they’re literally the exact same questions you asked……..

I can confirm, Linus is not an AI, cause if he were, it’d be hard for him to come up with several fantasy races AND keep it consistent throughout. I’ve messed around with generative AI before (although I never use it to write for…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Dude. Ai has been asking me these questions!

*stares in horror*

😂

Of course let me know. I’d love to help with the third book! Just let me know. Maybe while you’re on your online break you can draw a bunch of illustrations! *hint hint* 🙃

@hybridlore

Thank you! I know, I was thinking the same thing when I looked it over again. 😂

Glad it feels realistic. I kept breaking his character here in the other drafts, so I’m really working on taking it more slowly. (Even if it makes me want to shake some sense into him!)

First, how would they get Jonathan back into the…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

 
~FEEDBACK~
The Narrow Path Trilogy Book 2
 
Character:
~ Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

Martha. I just really liked her and could relate as an older sister. Some of her struggles felt similar to my own.

Eric was really interesting and fun. I also really liked James.

Alan…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

You gotta set it up like one of those quizzes someday. You know, the one people always use for scheduling group events that I can never figure out how to make.

@rae

I always name them after book or movie characters. (mostly books)

For instance, this time around we have Mathias and Cornflower (Redwall)

Puss-in-boots and Kitty Softpaws (Puss In Boots)

Matimeo and Iris (Matimeo A Tale Of Redwall)

And Joe Shanks (Green Ember)

Try books and see who works. I did Jane Austen once, Lord of the Rings,…[Read more]

I’m kind of behind (and a little stuck at the moment :/) but I’ll hopefully have my fist chunk soon.

@rae

Hmm… maybe Winter? I can’t think of anything else atm.

I like Hybridlore’s suggestion.

@linus-smallprint

ALAN BECKER DOODLES YES I AM NOT ALONE

@ellette-giselle

Good chapters! The rebellion is reminding me of the church meetings in my story.

Jonathan’s adjustment is pretty realistic. He’s struggling, but wants to please the people who are teaching him despite himself.

I don’t really know why they can’t just let him go–that was a bit blurry for me. I know he was captured and taken…[Read more]

@rae

Aww, they sound adorable! Sir Fluffyface is such a cute name 🤣

Name them after characters. That’s always a solid choice. 😉

Thunder has a new tail! I didn’t make the model, but I colored the tail.