Ruth

I think some of the others already were RPing as daytime too anyway…?

@raxforge

I kind of made it day. It’s like when Joshua had the sun and moon stand still….talk about taking verses out of reference.

Sorry, I realized I didn’t tag you in the intro RP.

@koshka

Okay, so we’re going to wait for it become day?

I’m assuming your story is at least the normal level of serious. Like, it might be funny at times, but it’s not a comedy as the whole point, right?

@grcr you’re welcome! Honestly, your original art style wasn’t THAT bad, but I’m assuming Roblox-y characters wasn’t the original intent of your story, so the new one does serve to humanize them and make them more believable in a serious story.

That’s kinda weird and made more sense in my head, but ehh.

@raxforge

I think I already know them. =)

@koshka

Do you want a description of Rax and Ben?

Syph

This building was big. A high arched door way soared overhead, long tendrils of ivy climbing up the span. The little sprite sucked in a fortifying breath and placed one foot on the threshold. Come on you guppie.

It was just a building. And people. Way too many people that towered like overgrown Wingless. He shuddered and forced his ot…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint Awesome cover! And Ellette is right–most drawing programs I know allow you to add a picture to your canvas and trace over it. I’ve done it lots of times.

@raxforge

Awesome! I’ll stick him outside the school (and let’s say it’s like, 7:30 am).

Also, he’s a character I made up for my sister’s story, so she has the right to correct me on things, or adjust stuff that doesn’t fit as she likes.

Description

Sypher is a water sprite. He is tall for his people at 4 feet 5 inches (in the book he’s a lot…[Read more]

@koshka

Alright! Sounds good!

@raxforge

Yeah, actually….how would Rac like to meet a character of mine? We’d have to jump it to the morning (night time aught to be over by now anyway), but if you’d like I’ll throw Syph in.

Rae’s Alpha might actually like to meet him too….

@koshka @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Do have an idea of where I may insert Rax and Ben somewhere? (Don’t worry Ellette, I’ll make sure that Rax doesn’t burnanate everything XD)

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper

Leo

“Thank you, Leo.”

The words were soft–Leo almost didn’t hear them. He looked up from repacking the first aid kit to see Rory’s face disappear farther into his pillow. The comforter rose and fell in a deep sigh, then fell into a steady, even rhythm.

Leo smiled. Whispered a “Goodnight, God bless you,” and s…[Read more]

@loopylin

He doesn’t actually want to kill anyone, but he’s a walking disaster so the middle works, lol

Yep

Rory totally looks like a cinnamon roll. I mean, I haven’t seen a picture of him, but he totally gives off cinnamon roll vibes

I also debated the ‘could actually kill you’ because could he actually? My sister said Rory would pop emotional…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @koshka @whalekeeper @theshadow

And y’all, you’re able to like, give me critiques for these. I just meant I didn’t need super precise, line-by-line edits since I’m going to rewrite this stuff eventually. So if you have input, please share it.

@theshadow

Thank you!!

@whalekeeper

Thanks!! So glad you like it! 😁 And hey, if you have tips, I know you’re the synesthesia expert so I would love your input (or advice) if you have any.

@rae

Oh my goodness! I love that!!

I must have it! lol.

@raxforge

Oh dear. That’s hilarious!

@loopylin

Want a picture of him? (It’s when he’s older in the actual novel that he’s in.)

@koshka  @whalekeeper

Rory

Rory curled up, letting his face disappear under the comforter. It was warm and soft. Unlike the military blankets he was used to. He wondered if this was what clouds felt like. Then he shuddered. He knew what clouds felt…[Read more]