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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
@esther-c @koshka @rae Thank y’all so much for reading and being so kind! 🥰🥰 Oh, and *offers tissues to all*…there we go XD
Honestly, rn the only one who is a struggle is Riker.
I know where Leon’s story is going…I know how Leon will finally come back to God…I know how he will come to the end of himself…
but Riker is another…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 months, 1 week ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @grcr @savannah_grace2009 @rae @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @anyone-else-idk-lol-XD
Anyone want a Leon/Riker update??👀
welp, you’re getting one anyways XD
TRIGGER WARNING: GUILT/SHAME. MENTIONS OF SIN. ALCOHOL. BAR FIGHT. BLOOD.Â
(but…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Name Help in the forum Characters 6 months, 1 week ago
Hmmm…. Idk maybe:
- Reed or Reid
- Itzak
- Mekhi
- Iokua (yo-koo-ah)
- Nasir
- Arturo
- Vihaan
- Yahir
Well… if those are too “rough sounding”, I can try to come up with “softer/sweeter” ones, if you want. 😊
why do I feel like I’m ordering a custom leather belt or something?!LOL
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whaley started the topic Summer Fantasy Romance in the forum Romance 6 months, 3 weeks ago
@power (first and foremost) @loopylin @freed_and_redeemed @esther-c @trailblazer @godlyfantasy12 @lightoverdarkness6 @highscribeofaetherium @rae @smiley @keilah-h (when you get back!) @anyone
Heyo! I have a new project in the works over the summer; it is a fantasy romance inspired by the likes of The Princess Bride and Jane Austen. I have written…[Read more]
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Liberty started the topic Looking for feedback on my first book! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 months ago
@esther
Hi everyone!
I’ve not been on KP in a while…I kind of forgot about it during life, but recently I’ve steadily worked on my first-ever printed book! I didn’t say published, because I’m not publishing it. At least, not yet. Currently,…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago
@folith-feolin @theducktator @rae @koshka
Thank y’all for all of your thoughts! They were IMMENSELY helpful!! (and I realized something about Frida {the stepmother} today that I didn’t realize before…let’s just say she deserves the nickname “Evil Lady” even more now😭😡 poor Felix *sobs*)
and with that, I will be changing Felix a bit (mostly…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago
@keilah-h @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @theducktator @rae @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @smiley @godlyfantasy12 @highscribeofaetherium @anyone-else-pls-helpppppppp-XD
Ok, so I have a bit of a plot hole.
For those of y’all who don’t know, I have five characters (all of whom are MC’s in their own novel) who I have…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago
@theducktator *offers tissues* I teared up too😭
@koshka Uhmmmmm SPOILERS XD
@keilah-h and still koshka
I’m so glad y’all like it so far!!
I make no promises that any specific person will survive, although I don’t think I could kill Matthias…I have become too attached already😂 It happened so fast💖
nor do I think I could part with…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months ago
I have more of Matthias (and others!!)
A scene (although there may be more at the beginning of it) and a snippet of the next scene (although there would be a POV scene from the 2nd MC between these two scenes, of course) that I wanted to share!!!
here it is!!!
and I officially love Moishe even more❤️😭💖
“I was v…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @esther-c (Hmm, he’s probably been playing since he was…mmm 10 probably. His mother taught him how to play, hehe. Although he stopped for several years…so he’s probably played for around…7 years or so?? He stopped after he married Iris, but still remembers how to play. (he even plays it in Freedom’s Fire once <3)) @rae @koshka @e…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 2 weeks ago
@loopylin @whalekeeper @rae @koshka @esther-c @elishavet-pidyon @lightoverdarkness6 @anyone-else-idk-lol-XD
Ok, soooooo I’ve been trying to brainstorm for another novel idea of mine that I’ve had for a while and would like to hear some inputs/thoughts
So, thanks to my Mom’s creativity, I finally figured out why Erich, a side character (and…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 2 weeks ago
@esther-c @whalekeeper @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @rae @joy-calle @keilah-h @anyone-else-idk-lol
Sooooo I’m currently working on a scene for one of my novels…and I need some advice😅
The two MCs of this novel have both been imprisoned by Soviet Forces (this is 1950s East Germany, btw) for being involved in the underground church.
It’s…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 3 weeks ago
@grcr @whalekeeper @keilah-h @esther-c @lightoverdarkness6 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @loopylin @smiley @rae @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @gracie-j @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-lol
who wants to read more Leon and Riker???
perhaps no one, but I want to share anyhow😂
anywhoooo, here we gooooooooooo
Klaus…Louisa…everyone sai…
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freedom replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 7 months, 3 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @koshka @rae @esther-c @anyone-else-help-meeeeeee
SOOOOOOO i’m currently working on Book 2 (Broken Shackles) of my main Trilogy (the trilogy that only features Leon/Riker as the MCs/POVs throughout all three novels)
but I’m really struggling with the middle of it 😩
I’m currently on…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 3 weeks ago
@loopylin @koshka @whalekeeper @rae @lightoverdarkness6 @keilah-h @esther-c @anyone-else-lol
Sooooooo, knowing how sad that chapter was…I give to y’all the following chapter!!!
The first half is kinda bittersweet (ok, ok, it’s still kinda sad…I’M SORRY, OK???😭💖) but the second half of the chapter…..eeeeeee, I love it sm and it is soooo…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 4 weeks ago
Random tagssss @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @rae @smiley @lightoverdarkness6 @acancello @grcr @anyone-else-cuz-i-can’t-think-of-anyone-else-right-now
Ignore tag or read on!
Just wanted to share a cute scene from a WIP that I’ve been working on a little too much. 😉
I seriously should be working on my main WIP rn, but whatever.It’s not p…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 months, 4 weeks ago
@lightoverdarkness6 @mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper @loopylin @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @esther-c @smiley @rae @anyone-else
ok, ok, I know I’m supposed to be gone but I really want some feedback on this chapter…I like how it turned out but I just REALLYYYYY need some feedback, haha, so I may still pop on and off on occasion but don’t expect…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Headaches in the Form of Characters. Help! in the forum Characters 8 months ago
Are you having problems with his younger self?
My immediate reaction was a mischievous giggle which I think came straight from Alpha himself.
Most of the hard Alpha is from after Emmie died, which is his thirties. His latter twenties were his years of bliss, and before that …
BTW, these ages are not set in stone yet. I just have…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Headaches in the Form of Characters. Help! in the forum Characters 8 months ago
Honestly, I think I forgot about this…
Anyways…
What are the main characteristics in Alpha that you want to keep?
Mainly his warrior mindset. For instance:
Grief is a weakness.
Watch your six o’clock.
Never give up until you die.
Personality is a result of purpose. We have a purpose for every character in a story,…
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RAE posted an update 8 months ago
Krogen: “Batten down the hatches, reef the main sail, shiver me timbers, here comes the mother of all typhoons! But we…”
“Krogen, Krogen, we’re in a rowboat, and that typhoon is a ripple.”
“Shut up. Or I’ll find a pool noodle.”
“What’s a pool noodle?”
“Shut up your mouth.” - Load More
#WondiansnotknowingEarthlingtermsagain
#PirateKrogen
#imaginaryadultfairytales
@theducktator @keilah-h you two probably would want to see this… Cgecko helped me out.
I think this is my favorite Krogen thing ever XD
@rae
🤣🤣🤣 That’s hilarious! “We’re in a rowboat and that typhoon is a ripple.” 🤣
LOL Krogen is hilarious.