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Ruth replied to the topic What is the cringiest thing you've ever written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
About this scene above:
Proud of it, NO!
Still like it because off Krogen, yeah.
You will see what I mean when I finish it…
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Ruth replied to the topic What is the cringiest thing you've ever written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
oh my gosh….lol I was reading it and I was like, oh it’s really good! and then I read this sentence:
I can’t tell you what Nahim’s face looked like because he never showed it to anyone.
And then I laughed.Not mean at all. I consider that sentence the thing the sums up my first draft. Awfulness, awfulness, awfulness. Except.…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic What is the cringiest thing you've ever written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Oh this is great! I still like this scene…
Nahim walked on. Suddenly his boots hit something solid and metal with a clank. Nahim walked about. (Ruee, what kinda of a sentence is that?!) It appeared to be a circular metal something. *Nahim discovers it’s a base, gets inside, blah blah blah* “Hello, Hello!” (Oh, did I mention I had no idea what…
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Ruth replied to the topic What is the cringiest thing you've ever written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I shall keep the spelling for effect…
Chapter 1 Nahim and Mandin
Nahim sat cofortably near Mandin liking out over the lake Gaylax. He was young, only being 19 years in age, Mandin was 5 years older and had more expierance but they still got along together well. I can’t tell you what Nahim’s face looked like because he never showed it to anyone.…
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Ruth replied to the topic What is the cringiest thing you've ever written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @anyone-else
Ready for some pieces of writing from when I had absolutely no idea what I was doing?
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Okay, I think Chase’s stutter may return…
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Ruth replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I have a headache thanks to my little brother, ask me another day, but rn…all I can think about is dragons and the philological warfare of sirens…
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 7 months ago
Some weird person texted me thinking I was some guy named James…I just texted them back in two sentences of Realn. They haven’t replied yet. XD
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Oh well, Jr’s probably to riled to notice.
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Ruth replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
I concur!
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Ruth posted a new activity comment 2 years, 7 months ago
Some trouble there! I wonder what they were like when they were two! XD a rodeo of fun for sure!
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
@jonas @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium
I’m gonna warn ya’ll (I know I spell that wrong, but that’s how I pronounce it so…) That Junior is getting on edge, I can feel him getting angry. Oh, and btw, when Junior gets angry, he starts dangerously throwing knives.
Nahim Jr.
“I’m afraid that boots are not allowed in this dance practice. You w…[Read more]
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Ruth posted a new activity comment 2 years, 7 months ago
Two year old horse, that is. Those babies can be funny (and bratty) sometimes! XD
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Ruth posted a new activity comment 2 years, 7 months ago
English is pretty good, though, that’s really the only thing I know. Not sat in a western saddle since I was a baby.
Hat thief in the field! Lol! Sounds like something a two year old would do!
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Two year old horse, that is. Those babies can be funny (and bratty) sometimes! XD
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
If Calvin asks around, he might eventually discover Chase was the last one with him, and then ✨drama✨
Ooooh…I like that idea!
Nahim Jr.
“You watch it, Hugo!” Junior yelled, clearly agitated. He caught Nar giving him a “don’t do it” look. He leaned against the doorframe, crossing his arms and…[Read more]
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Ruth posted a new activity comment 2 years, 7 months ago
That’s great! It sounds like a day of bliss!
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It was….and his buddy kept stealing my hat…haha!
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Oh my gosh I really…really want to learn English riding…and jumping…it looks like so much fun!!
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English is pretty good, though, that’s really the only thing I know. Not sat in a western saddle since I was a baby.
Hat thief in the field! Lol! Sounds like something a two year old would do!
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Two year old horse, that is. Those babies can be funny (and bratty) sometimes! XD
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I just love how collected the horse is, and the saddle and the tack and EVERYTHING!!! I really don’t ride western…I haven’t ridden since the summer…hehe. I just love being with my horses (plus my horse is a little lame and arthritic so I can’t really ride him without him being stiff and sore) and playing with them, haha!
Yeah, and then Spirit…[Read more]
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Some trouble there! I wonder what they were like when they were two! XD a rodeo of fun for sure!
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I would have loved to see them when they were two…I bet they were so adorable!!! (and silly!)
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Nahim Jr.
“Yeah, I kill my own victims. I’m Nahim Nayhelm Jr., what else do you expect? A Warrior is the one who goes to war.”
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Nahim Jr.
“No, I have my own knives, my own wrist, and my own talent of being an elite. I kill my own victims.”
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 7 months ago
Nahim Jr
“Barely any time! I spend my day sparring with Onyx and getting beatup, while I practise! What else is there to do?!”
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Ruth posted a new activity comment 2 years, 7 months ago
Yahooo! Go girl!
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That’s hilarious!
lol!!!!!!!!
Haha!