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@radically-surrendered I’m writing up a synopsis.

@radically-surrendered Welcome!

@Emily Thanks for the ice cream!! *waves*

*pokes head in* I LIVE.

I’ll be writing, though I probably won’t say very much as I’m a little busy today so I’ll be focusing on wording. 😀

@0-0enyali0-0 As Dekreel said, focus on the characters rather than the fight and that’ll make the scene that much better.

I can’t recommend research enough. Learn as much as you possibly can about the method of fighting that you’re using. The more you know, the easier the fight scenes will become to write.

@Dekreel everyone else has some good ideas, and I second theirs. Basically, if you can bring in a side plot or throw in another antagonist to add more conflict and higher stakes it’ll keep your middle going strong.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 Oooh nice! Dieselpunk is so fun to write in, and that concept of three islands all different realms–SO COOL. Do the medieval and dieselpunk worlds have any technology from the futuristic one/from each other? It would make sense for that a little. What’s the politics like?

@0-0enyali0-0 I have arrived to belatedly add my welcome to the many others that have preceded me. *waves* WELCOME. 😛 I’m Jane, and it’s such a pleasure to have you join us!!! *passes you pizza* Welcome and welcome and I hope you can settle into the forum comfortably.

I won’t ask you any questions, because otherwise you might be overwhelmed. xD…[Read more]

@Catwing ooh very cool. I love that you took the pictures yourself! That’s super.

@princessfoo eheheh. *pulls cowl up to shade face* Maybe. Maybe not. *slips back into the shadows*

@salome01w4g Yay good on you! See you in the future. 😀

@SeekJustice I second what Kate said. If you’ve just had a passionate speech you can easily play off that with having someone in the crowd disagree and start throwing things, or agree and start throwing things. Mob mentality is a huge thing in situations like that so it’s not hard at all really.

@SeekJustice haha yes I have joined you. XD

@salome01w4g Heyy! *waves* Sounds like fun. 🙂

@SeekJustice @salome01w4g I haven’t said anything here for a while, but I have been writing. I now will officially drop in (just so you all know I’m still alive. xP) and do some writing with you two! 😀

@aislinn-mollisong Ooh I really like this!! Good job. 😀

Welcome @sam-kowal!!! *throws confetti* I am Jane, Aussie, and adventurer. *bows and hands you pizza* I also like pizza. Welcome to the forum, and I hope you enjoy your stay!!

Do you have a favourite author?

@Daeus much better! I haven’t got anything else to note about that. 😀 *thumbs up*

@Daeus personally the site strikes me as good but not eye-catching, this could be because I’m a little of a website snob, with having a web design and developer as a sister. 😛 My thoughts are:

– seconding what everyone’s said about the ‘get your free training now’ button being jarring and not professional or fitting with the rest of the…[Read more]

@Ethryndal awww I’m so glad to know you through the forum. <3 <3 *sends you a kangaroo*

*EDIT: the ‘editing stage’ of the WIP I mentioned is more of a complete rewrite so it will be involving writing, not just editing.