@princesswriter
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Homework for Video 9: Theme & Story Structure in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 6 months ago
@aratrea thank you!! 🙂
I’m sort of struggling with my beginning. It feels a bit up-down and not entirely connected to the plot. After the inciting incident there’s seven chapters before the first plot point and I’m not sure how to keep the plot moving during that time not just pointless action scenes.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@winter-rose any time. 🙂 I’m very happy to try help out if I can.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@Winter-rose oh nice. 🙂
Some from my names list: Evans, Hier, Morgan, Enwood, Brys. -
Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@Dragon-snapper okay thanks for writing!!
@winter-rose hmmm what’s the genre?
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@winter-rose you’re very welcome. 🙂 I have super powers on offer whenever needed. 😛
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@winter-rose ah nice! *gives you super powers so you don’t get distracted* Have fun with that. 😀
I’m kind of switching between plotting my novel-to-be and writing the first chapter. -
Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@Dragon-snapper granted. 😛 But what we really need is some taters.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper *draws sword* *does an epic speech*…for Frodo. *charges*
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@Dragon-Snapper *draws sword* *does an epic speach*…for Frodo. *charges*
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@dragon-snapper and @winter-rose I too shall be writing for a while from now.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@Kate-Flournoy wow. That’s…super long…
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Homework for Video 9: Theme & Story Structure in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 6 months ago
@aratrea sorry for that. I’ve tried narrow it all down a bit – as well as fix that first plot point problem.
Inciting Event: Will smuggles himself onto a plane to get out of the country, hoping to get away from the Agents pursuing him for good. Unfortunately he gets seen upon landing and recognised as an outlaw and wanted man. Manages to get away…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus yay! 😀 I got a nice lot of plotting done and 254 words for my first chapter!
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus I’ll be writing until then. 🙂
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Hi guys! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 6 months ago
@Kina-Lamb eeep yes. 😀 I really like the secret agent/undercover mission concept so it’s been really fun to play with. The thing I’m trying out to make it more unique (hopefully?) if having the secret agent character still in the middle of his training, so when he accidentally ends up in the middle of a situation (that a full agent would consider…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Homework for Video 9: Theme & Story Structure in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 6 months ago
I have absolutely no idea what I’m really doing. I don’t know why but I got really super stuck on this. So I may have done it completely wrong. *flops*
Dystopian/futuristic setting. Very (very) loose Robin Hood retelling. Positive Character Arc. I guess Will’s external goal is pretty much the same as his thematic development/goal, both of which…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Homework for Video 9: Theme & Story Structure in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 6 months ago
I have absolutely no idea what I’m really doing. I don’t know why but I got really super stuck on this. So I may have done it completely wrong. *flops*
Dystopian/futuristic setting. Very (very) loose Robin Hood retelling. Positive Character Arc. I guess Will’s external goal is pretty much the same as his thematic development/goal, both of which…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Hi guys! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 6 months ago
@Kina-Lamb one character travels around through a lot of different countries, so has picked up on a lot of languages. The other is training as a secret agent so had to learn a lot of them so he could fit in during his missions.
I know some French. But my sister knows more. -
Jane Maree replied to the topic Hi guys! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 6 months ago
@Kina-Lamb yep. ^-^ I have several characters that can speak multiple languages so having at least a vague knowledge of the language really helps.
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Hi guys! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 6 months ago
@Kina-lamb I started Spanish last year. Because I needed to learn a foreign language for school work and I was uttering sick of French + I always thought Spanish was cool + lots of people speak Spanish + I’ve always had a thing for Spain + I want to write a Spanish character who slips into Spanish whenever he’s annoyed or scared because it just…[Read more]
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