@princesachronicle22
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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Romantic Subplot help? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
You’re welcome!
Yes, I’m thinking that it’s his only option. And the earning Vital makes sense, it would be in an insanely high demand material, which would make it extremely expensive. But it also needs to be semi accessible to the public so people survive. 🤔 It would create a very interesting economy dynamic I think, I’l…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
Okay, idea. What if the villains are already in the castle, and meet the groups that way to start working with them?
I’m thinking it would be better to have them arrive in a separate scene, so that they can be briefed on what they’re supposed to do. (I also haven’t even decided on mine yet.)
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Scoutillus Finch replied to the topic Romantic Subplot help? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
I think your idea is rather interesting! I might as well give my two cents, but for me, if a romance winds up in my stories, it tends to just kind of happen, I’ll just be thinking and I’ll realize, “oh, they make a good couple!” or something along those lines. So, do take my cents with a grain of salt lol.
I recommend…[Read more]
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Power replied to the topic Romantic Subplot help? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
Probably both! 😜
And now I shall take Bible verses out of context to prove my point. 👨⚖️
Deu 7:3 KJV Neither shalt thou make marriages with them; thy daughter thou shalt not give unto his son, nor his daughter shalt thou take unto thy son.
Jdg 14:16-17 EasyEnglish 16 Then Samson’s wife started to cry. She threw herself at…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Adventure (Formerly Character Party) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
@rae @princesachronicle22 @beth-torres @jonas
Snake
The doors creaked open. Carrie and the alien-with-colors [I don’t think he knows her name] had attempted to bust through, but apparently the inhabitants of the castle didn’t mind opening it for them.
A rather strange decision….He was new to this whole kingdom-and-its-ruler thing, but even…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
@princesachronicle22 probably not, I think we’re “restarting”
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
@princesachronicle22 @esther-c
Allen
He stepped out of the darkness into an old castle, not unlike the ones he’d seen as pictures on his father’s datapads.
Strange….
Hadn’t he just been in an Imperial cruiser not ten minutes ago?
“Drop your weapons or I won’t hesitate to attack.” came a voice from behind him.
Startled, he pulled out his g…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
@princesachronicle22 @esther-c sorry for not replying. I’ve been busy this whole week lol
@esther I’m probably putting in Allen, a charrie from a Star Wars fanfic I haven’t used in a while, and since I don’t know if you know what he looks like, I’ll give a description:
He actually resembles @princesa’s two Pelgarkines with his azure blue skin…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
@princesachronicle22 @keilah-h
Yeah sure!
Everton Barlowe
Age: 17ish
Appearance: light skin; thick, side-swept, dark brown hair; deep-set, chocolate brown eyes; 5’ 11’’; since I can’t share pics rn, if you want to know what Ev looks like, just look up Froy Gutierrez. Any pic of him with brown hair looks like Ev so much, it’s crazy, lol.
Per…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
Awesome, thanks!!
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Power replied to the topic Romantic Subplot help? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
Romance!!!!! AAAAAAAAA!!!!! 😱😱😱
*Convulses into spasms then collapsed to the ground* 😫😫😫
NOOOOOOO!!!! HAVE MERCY ON YOUR POOR READERS!!!! 😭😭😭
IT’S SO DRAMATIC!!! 😤😤😤
Okay, now to go read Laser Moose and Rabbit Boy. 😎
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Esther replied to the topic Romantic Subplot help? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 1 week ago
Glad I could help! :))
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Esther replied to the topic Romantic Subplot help? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 2 weeks ago
Oooh, I love romantic side plots XD
You could also toss in some conflict and have the guy meet her with bad intentions, like to figure out how to make Vital or steal it, etc. But then he ends up liking her. I feel like that trope is kinda overused, but if it’s done well, it doesn’t bother me.
I like Loopy’s idea too.…[Read more]
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Loopy replied to the topic Romantic Subplot help? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 2 weeks ago
Ok, well I’m definitely no expert on this, but I will try to help.
I think he should probably be someone from outside the city, because that would then make her curious and maybe ask him things about what it’s like outside. Also, I think it would be important that he either doesn’t know or doesn’t care that Nikari can ma…[Read more]
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ryry started the topic I Have So Much Writing Material But Can't Actually Write It All: A Lament 🙂 in the forum Fantasy 8 months, 2 weeks ago
@pixie, @scripter-of-kingdoms, @thearcaneaxiom, @euodia-vision, @princesachronicle22, @lightoverdarkness6, @esther-c, @loopylin, and anybody else 🙂
Ok this is just a writing dump, feel free to come and go as you please.
Some of you may know that I am currently writing a book with one of my best friends from school, and it comes with a LOT of…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 2 weeks ago
@princesachronicle22 Thanks! He’s a lot fun to write XD
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Koshka replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 2 weeks ago
It does seem to be acting strange, but I can’t tell why. What does it look like on your end?
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 2 weeks ago
@princesachronicle22 @keilah-h
Yeah, I think I will need a description (: I’m assuming you’ll need one for my charries as well?
Everton
“I hate this place.”
“Ever—”
“Can’t we just break through one of these—” he pounded a fist against the glass, “—windows?”
“Um, no. Take a breather, bro.”
Ev tried to keep his deep breath as silent as possib…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 months, 2 weeks ago
You’re totally fine!! I get that 😉 If you don’t get to it soon, I might do it. I just haven’t felt like RPing lately. XD
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