@princesachronicle22
Active 5 days, 4 hours ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Loopy replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Awww November 🧡 I really want Ara to show up and just smack Callan across the face. Probably won’t happen though lol
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TheShadow replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Sara, your writing is so beautiful. While I was reading, the entire time I was thinking “this is a beautiful sentence” or “this is incredibly true.” Your writing such wonderful truths, and doing a great job. Keep going, your writing is great!!
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@loopylin awww thx!! I feel like my writing is subpar tbh….but idk sometimes posting it elsewhere helps? idk…I give myself such a hard time. I’m just writing it down, and I have to remind myself that every single second XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 2 months ago
@whalekeeper for me I feel like my writing isn’t like…good enough? Like it’s too childish? or…idk…not (mature isn’t the right word…) like I don’t like doing descriptions…so def description writing, but I just feel like its not great. I feel like I wrote better in the past and that thought process stinks so I try not to dwell on it…
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Loopy replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Yayy! I’ve been copying down the entire school rp into a google doc, and reading your old writing is making me miss your characters so much.
I’m glad you got to take a break, but I’m also glad you’re getting back into it :]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
ANYWAYYY if u want to read the scenes I’ve got…it’s November scenes… (good luck gang…don’t hate me XD)
here’s the first one! (btw I’m not looking for critiques. this is a draft and idk how the writing is honestly…im not super happy but im just getting words down.)
And its not super linear cuz Im not doing Ara’s…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Hi gang!!!
SOOO As the title says I started writing again! Yay!
I just couldn’t get away from my series yall…I tried with the old Peter Pan story (which I love) but I just couldn’t get away from my WIP. But that’s ok cuz im finally getting words again!!!
I came up with an idea thats kinda working now! Writing all the scenes for one…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 1 year, 2 months ago
What if I said everythingÂHm, I guess I would like to get better at writing more interesting, distinct sentences and showing more than telling. I think I’ve gotten a smidge better at writing okay sentences, but nowhere near as using excellent word choices or stuff like that.
I would also like to show my themes better instead of…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I think so, although if she doesn’t I can send it to her again.
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TheShadow replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
I really like them, they’re good!! Nice job!!
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
The story is looking really good so far, although I’m a little confused by Cole. Is he meant to be really smart, but doesn’t necessarily care about school? Sorry, I just need a little clarification. Each character is good though, I particularly find Alec interesting.
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Esther replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Awww! Esther!!! That means literally so so SO much to me!!
I appreciate you so much, you’re amazing 🥺🥺💜💜💜💜
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So for a while I stopped writing altogether, because even when I would try to write happy things that didn’t include violence or too much evil or darkness, somehow the topic would always shift. And my heart was…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Esther, I also think it’s so cool how you write about small everyday struggles. It’s hard to find beauty in the mundane, when it seems the same day after day.
But in your writing, you can make even the everyday struggles, the repeating tasks beautiful, and everything you write has a message, and I think it’s so cool!!!! And I know God will use you <33
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Awww! Esther!!! That means literally so so SO much to me!!
I appreciate you so much, you’re amazing 🥺🥺💜💜💜💜
I never really thought about it that way!! But that makes a lot of sense!!
Honestly I’ve struggled a lot with the way that I just go to the hard things that need to be talked about…people like my parents have said that my…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
It also reminds me how God uses the same talents of different people for different purposes. For example, you tend to gravitate towards darker themes (not in a bad way!) and deal with difficult topics that need to be dealt with and seen in the light of God’s love. On the other hand, I tend to focus on the smaller, everyday struggles I personally f…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Sara Sara Sara Sara Sara Sara….
Girl this is literally so good and I wish I had gotten to it sooner!!!
I can tell you poured your heart into this and can see it on every page. I’m so glad you decided to go on with this. It has already impacted me in little ways in the short time I read it and I know God will use it to imp…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@grcr Reference pics for Acheron (tho I just want the cape at the side to be a shoulder cape, so it isn’t very long if you can do that :3)

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freedom replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@grcr Reference pics for Michael

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freedom replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@grcr yay!!
so I’m gonna request you to draw the main main characters from my fantasy idea, Michael and Acheron🤭
Name: Michael
Age: 23
Personality: Determined, brave, stubborn, loyal, tends to have a very calm/relaxed demeanor
Appearance : Curly blonde hair, pale skin, blue eyes, normal male build (not muscled but not skinny either) (will…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Want me to draw your character? in the forum Art 1 year, 2 months ago
@grcr would you be willing to draw two characters in the same picture? 🤭
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