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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
I requested access 😀
I thought we came to the conclusion that he would be bullied horribly. But, the poor boy is bullied anyhow, so its just a matter of whether it would be better or worse.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
There’s exceptions to every rule. But the time jumps are less noticeable in the book than the movie/musical because there’s so much extra stuff in there.
Honestly, I think its one of those tools that can be used very well and effectively, but often isn’t.
Most certainly 🙂
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
Huh, they’re all out of whack. That’s really weird.
Yeah, I think there would be people who wouldn’t enjoy your style, but once I got into it I really enjoyed it.
I have seen people do those time jumps in published books, personally I’ve never really liked it, but that could just be me. Still, I think you can make it work.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
I was about to say I lived in the future, but two hours probably isn’t enough to have read a completed first draft, so I’ll just say nothing at all.
I think its pretty good. It did take me a while to get used to your writing style, but that’s probably just what I’m used to reading/writing. I’m not entirely sure about the massive jump in…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
@catwing 😛
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
@valtmy Pretty good. just super tired after coming back from a trip. How are you?
Not at the moment. I’m just working on blog stuff. 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
@valtmy I think I’ll be on for a while. 🙂
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
Well, yes it is 😛
Also, it really doesn’t take a lot for me to get distracted.
Okay, I’ll go searching for it.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
I need to do some more, since I’m rather devastatingly far behind…but you’re novel is looking very interesting at the moment (can I have the link to part 2?) and I’m up to a boring bit.
Well, a kind of boring bit. Someone gets kidnapped, but its boring before that.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
I probably won’t get time for it today, but I’ll definitely get to it some day. Hopefully soon.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
I would hate to see her become worse. :l
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
Yes, I would think so.
However, they both (hopefully) will improve.
Are you planning on improving Myeongwol??
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
I’m having a little trouble finding where I’m up to. I definitely remember the introduction to “Young Lady Kang”…
Well, I’ve found a bit I don’t remember, so I’m just going to read from there.
Oh, and I’ve just realised that the queen from my story is turning out a lot like Myeongwol and I’m not sure how I feel about that.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #21 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
By the way, how’s that other WIP of yours going? That one with the strange, captivating crown prince in it? I don’t believe I’ve read any of that one.
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