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Hope Ann replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@winter-rose Congratulations!!!!! And what everyone else said. 😀 There is only so many ways to say it, I suppose, but great job.
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Hope Ann started the topic Government Conspiracies in the forum Sci-Fi 9 years, 8 months ago
I need help. I am working on a futuristic trilogy. In the first book, there is a rebellion. The rebels discover something the government is planning, and by exposing it they help start the rebellion. Whatever this thing is, it is something which will harm the rebels too, so the rebellion needs to start before it goes into effect. I currently have…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Joseph's Songbird [a Christmas short story] in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@Abigail-blomberg Wow! That’s a really awesome story!
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Snapper replied to the topic Joseph's Songbird [a Christmas short story] in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 8 months ago
@Abigailblomberg Wow! That’s a really awesome story!
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Snapper replied to the topic Happy 2017! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 8 months ago
@perfectfifths Happy New Year! (I am going to be so tired today for staying up till 12 and past) *yawn*
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Snapper replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions #2 in the forum Art 9 years, 9 months ago
Oh yeah…heh. 😛 @daeus
Well, I kinda like the black and white idea, but I would be warned to make it readable. I don’t know what your thinking of, but what I have in my head is hard to read. And are you planning on keeping the guy in addition to the noose and the girl?? or would you loose one of them. All three of those would look cluttered. I…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions #2 in the forum Art 9 years, 9 months ago
@daeus If he is struggling with something, he could be pouring over a book on a desk, his head in his hands.
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Snapper replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions #2 in the forum Art 9 years, 9 months ago
@daeus Just a thing about that guy (who I’m assuming is Edwin Brooke)…at first glance it looks as if he is holding an axe, not a cane. (or is it even a cane) And I also am not sure about all the faded letters in his face.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions #2 in the forum Art 9 years, 9 months ago
I like that cover. Perhaps the red could be a bit bolder so it stands out more. My one thought was that if the man was in action and/or wore some red it would pop more. But I don’t know if that is possible. Also…what is he holding?
I don’t care for the background picture, though a locket by itself could work. The hand and locket could work, but…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Book Cover Opinions in the forum Art 9 years, 9 months ago
I agree with getting your name the same color as the title. And I think the fonts should match better. Your name isn’t going to be fancy like the title, but they just seem mismatched right now. It would be cool if the pattern thing could be a symbol from the book, but I’m not sure if there are any overt symbols in your book…
And one picky…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 9 months ago
Any critique I have has already been mentioned. I like it. 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Merry Christmas! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@rolena-hatfield I really enjoy getting together with family and spending time with them.
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Snapper replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 9 months ago
Otherwise, @daeus I think it’s great!
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Snapper replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 9 months ago
@daeus Very good!
I have a few suggestions, though.
In the second sentence, you use the word ‘his’ quite a bit. Overly so.His dedication to his wronged family is powerful enough to bring him through any trial, but his youth and inexperience hold him back.
Maybe you could write it as: “Dedication to his wronged family can bring him…[Read more]
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Snapper started the topic Merry Christmas! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
I know that some of you don’t celebrate it as much as I do (we go all out), but I wanted to say Merry Christmas.
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Snapper started the topic in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
To those of you who do, and those who do not, celebrate Christmas, I wish you all a Merry Christmas and Merry Christmas Eve anyway!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
I’m beginning to feel very alone, actually. Is there anyone on here who does the normal Christmas thing? (i.e. presents, Christmas service {this year it’s on Sunday! Yay!}, Christmas tree, Christmas feast, Christmas cookies, Christmas lights)???
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@kate-flournoy Facepalms. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@kate-flournoy Facepalms. They say so much in once movement. 😛
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@kate-flournoy Blue paint. 😛
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