Louise Fowler

yay! Writer’s corner #10!!! *looks around and realises that she’s talking to no one* hey, @Clairec @jane-maree @perfectfifths @anyone-else I’m outlining if anyone wants to join 😀

@catwing okay, so that’s pretty short *breathes out in relief* like @perfectfifths said, I have holidays for half of dec and all of Jan and I’m hoping to get my editing done then, and I should have plenty of time for your novel. I’m currently beta reading another novel, which i’m already past the deadline for, so I don’t think I will have enough…[Read more]

@perfectfifths Got it. And it’s actually around 52,000, not 59,000.

If someone wants to be in the first group (instead of her, so that it’s even.) tell me.

First off, it is 52,789 words.
@dragon-snapper *laughs* You could consider your front feet for clapping? I understand. “My life is busy, but I still take time to ride my dragon.” (That should go on the inspiration board!)

@beta-readers I don’t know a good dead line… How about as soon as you can? 😛 Early-ish November?

Beta-reading (at least my…[Read more]

@perfectfifths Thanks 🙂

@dragon-snapper @that_writer_girl_99 I’m not sure I know what you mean. How would writing it from his POV be different? I thought I would write it diary style because he will only get to re-enter into the story on certain days.

@daeus Hey! That is a pretty neat concept! I love how he gets to be the heroes neighbor. That’s awesome.

I agree with @perfectfifths that you should continue this, however, I think it’d be better if you didn’t write it from the perspective of his diary, and instead just his POV, first person.

But that’s it really. Otherwise I love it!

Hm… @daeus, I considered that and it didn’t seem as strange in my opinion. Satan himself used to be one of God’s chief angels so I don’t think that it’s far off that he could be using the same form of power for nefarious uses.

Other than that, would it make more sense that “magic” in this story is more like a power made by God and used by the…[Read more]

Okay, so first. I’ve considered the storyline I’ve been making, and the concept of making an allegory, so I thought I’d just drop the act and admit that it’s more of an allegory than anything else.

So… I’ve made a few changes to explain things better and to fit the Bible more!

1. “magic” in this story is really God’s power. But when others…[Read more]

@winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @dragon-snapper @epicaddie2 @daughteroftheking
@aislinn-mollisong @seekjustice @perfectfifths @jane-maree @jess-penrose
Then the brave catwing spread open her silky black wings and took flight.
She flew through the sky, swift in her vigil brought forth a quill to write.

Thanks everyone!
I worked on this when I wasn’t sleepy. ( 😛 )

You Were Called By The King

Alex is not normal. She and her friends talk to animals.
But in the course of a few days the normal of their abnormal lives is shaken. They all receive a mysterious riddle from a cloaked messenger of a long dead tyrant king.

One Crown, Three Parts
Soft,…[Read more]

@catwing Good job with the improvements. 😀

I also liked @perfectfifths‘ improvements. I’ll go off those and add some adjustments myself.

Alex is not normal. She and her friends talk with animals. (No need to say they understand animals. That’s assumed if they talk with them.)

Then she and her friends meet a mysterious cloaked messenger, who…

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@catwing I like the second one too, and I like the suggestions @perfectfifths has made. I would read the book based on that blurb, which is ultimately what you want!

@catwing I prefer your second version heaps, it’s more… blurby. And I also really like the few little tweaks that @perfectfifths made. *thumbs up* Good job!

@perfectfifths It was a coincidence.
@seekjustice @jess-penrose @daeus @emily Thanks all! Here’s two new versions…

I wasn’t sure which way to go, so I’m trying both. (They are improving. Slowly.)
I’ll keep playing around with it, in the word pit. 😉
Which do you like better and what are your thoughts?

You Were Called By The King

Alex and…[Read more]

@that_writer_girl_99 @aislinn-mollisong @perfectfifths Thank you! I was having trouble, and this version sounds better…

You Were Called By The King
Best friends Jack, Alex, Cele, John, Chase, and Amelia are not normal. You could even say they’re abnormal. Even before they met a mysterious cloaked messenger. They must save Allore by finding…[Read more]

@perfectfifths Thanks. It does.

@xonos-darkgrate
Yippee!!!!! 😀

@perfectfifths
Hmmm…… my favorite *ducks again because my brother hates him* was Solo.
Yeah it is sad….. I remember watching the trailer and being like who are these old people and then realizing it was them I was like NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! What happened!!!!

@perfectfifths yeah, well the CGI for Leia wasn’t major in RO she had maybe a 10 second scene. I’m also a bit skeptical they even used CGI they could have just clipped a scene from a new hope.
One (I’m taking a risk) I never like Leia…. so not having here in anymore movies wouldn’t make me sad………. *ducks encase anyone really liked her…*