@perfectfifths
Active 5 years, 7 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Scott Gustafson in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@daughteroftheking @jane-maree @perfectfifths Yeah, he’s got a serious gift. 😀
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@seekjustice @perfectfifths @jessi-Rae @dragon-snapper @emily @jess-penrose
@winter-rose @aislinn-mollisong
I am working on my NaNo story!!! -
Catwing replied to the topic SoOoO.. in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@perfectfifths To tell @CK4always about NaNo camp if you knew about that.
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Catwing replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 7 years ago
For my current work, Starting Fires, this is Rebekah…
The sword is in the works…
@daughteroftheking @seekjustice @jessi-Rae [I found the sketch pad with the pictures of my dog from years ago. Did you want me to post them tomorrow?] @emily @winter-rose @aislinn-mollisong @jane-maree @perfectfifths @jess-penrose -
Catwing replied to the topic SoOoO.. in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
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Emma Flournoy started the topic Scott Gustafson in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
Hey people.
Have any of you ever heard of or seen the work of artist Scott Gustafson? He does a lot of fairy-tale/fantasy/fables art, and it is AMAZING. His art looks so real, but at the same time has an extremely cute, bookish quality to it. Considering we have a few artists, and fantasy and fairy-tale lovers here, I thought you might want to…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Haikus in the forum Poetry 7 years ago
I’m on a hiatus yes…but I just had to say it– @perfectfifths It’s from Sumo of the Opera, Veggietales-the Potato said it.
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Mariposa Aristeo replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@emily-d No, I’ve never read any of Chuck Black’s books (I’m not much into fantasy). And like @salome01w4g and @perfectfifths, I’ve never heard of Sigmund Brouwer. What kind of stuff does Sigmund write? 🙂
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Emily D replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@emily @perfectfifths @rolena-hatfield @mariposa @salome01w4g @catwing @joy @allison-grace @epicaddie2
Hey there girls!
Question: Have any of you read/listened to any book (s) by Chuck Black or Sigmund Brouwer? 🙂
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Catwing started the topic On the issue of powerful swords. in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
So for this book I’m working on there are some powerful swords. For now the Dragon Sword and the Da’Hathian Sword.
But for their powers…
Dragon Sword. (Orange)
Orange ball (I can’t detail for you guys cause it may spoil things)
Blast of orange light.Da’Hathian Sword (Blue)
Glows blue.
Can make frogs happy.
Ice.Basically I have two swords…[Read more]
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Lady Iliara replied to the topic The Red Dragon in the forum Poetry 7 years ago
@daeus @catwing @perfectfifths @emily
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Daeus started the topic Cover Feedback in the forum 7 years ago
Hi KeePers,
I just got a cover design for a short story I’m writing and I wanted to get your feedback on it.
I personally am very happy with the sharp, clean design, but I do think there’s room for a tiny bit more detail. I’m thinking maybe I should add some very subtly ominous feature, but I’m not sure what that should be. Or maybe the…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy posted a new activity comment 7 years ago
@PerfectFifths I’m on the third book of Sanderson’s Mistborn trilogy now. They’re pretty good books (talk about insane plot twists—huge page-turners). The prose has a ton of telling instead of showing and uses the same body language tags WAY too much, and generally drives me nuts; and I also don’t like the books as well as I might because there…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
@perfectfifths Yeah. I knew it was in editing mode. I left it that way because sometimes people like to leave long comments at the end of a story. Suggesting mode is much better for editing in general though. You can switch it to suggesting mode whenever you like.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
@perfectfifths Yes, I think I sent you an email, but if you didn’t get it, you can access it here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/16ycjr6zOnxjAtIpSkMQ6SDkHKlg5iX3oMfA9aHpUD7I/edit?usp=sharing
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Hannah replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
@perfectfifths Perelandra was really creepy but tbh it had a good ending.
@daeus I read it last night , should I leave comments on the GG Doc or how do you want feed back? -
Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
@perfectfifths Great. That’s a very good discipline to have. If you want to sign up, just contact me through the link I provided earlier on in this thread.
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Catwing replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 1 month ago
@daughteroftheking @aislinn-mollisong @jane-maree @seekjustice @perfectfifths @xonos-darkgrate @salome01w4g
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
@perfectfifths
Content. No language. No sex. Violence: a general description of Aztec sacrifices. Description is not graphic, but if just the idea of human sacrifices makes you sick, then you could have problems with it. One guy has a vision in which he is lacerating himself, though there is not a lot of detail in that part.Otherwise, this book…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 1 month ago
@perfectfifths I don’t have an exact deadline, but if anyone could do it in about a week, that would be optimal.
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@emma-flournoy I think Mistborn is in my to-read shelf on Goodreads…
Yes, I kinda had an idea that it’s not a warm-and-fuzzy animal book, and, to be honest, I’m only reading it because it is short, and I’m trying to finish my Goodreads reading challenge I set for myself – not that I don’t have enough breathing room as it is. XD But I’m only two…[Read more]
Well two books away ain’t bad at all. Especially if one of them is Animal Farm, of course. 😀
Yep. And I’m finding it interesting, if not enjoying it. Definitely worth the read though.
Great.
I just finished Animal Farm last night. It was depressing, and disgusting, but still worth the read. I could tell exactly what was going on the whole time, but the animals were painfully unaware. And in the end, they were no better off than when they started, if not worse!
I KNOW. It’s so painful. *ascends soapbox and yells at the world* COMMUNISM IS HORRID FOR EVERYONE!
What’s ironic is, George Orwell was something of a socialist himself, though not Communist level. Maybe he didn’t realize the hypocrisy in writing something like that, or just didn’t see it the same way. But it’s quite sad.
Maybe he believed in the ideals, but only saw the corruption, so was sending a message to fellow socialists? I don’t know much about all the isms. 😛
Suffice it to say, all the isms are mucho flawed.
I figured that much. 😛
Are you participating in NaNo, or are you the one that doesn’t write? (I keep forgetting 😛 ).
Yup, that’s me. So no, instead I get to sit around and congratulate myself that I’m just a bibliophile and not a writer, and so need not go through the pain of NaNo. XD
*shudder* Seriously, it sounds like a ton o’ work. Are you doing it? Have you done it before?
All right, is Kate participating in NaNo? 😛
Yes I am, yes I have, and yes it is a lot of work, but this year I’m using it as the way to start writing consistently again.One of my good friends is helping me by doing word sprints with me every day and keeping me on track. 😛
No…I don’t know if she’s ever considered it seriously, but I don’t think it’d fit very well with our schedule anyway. We have a cabin rental business which we handle as a family, so I don’t know if the busyness of NaNo would work out quite right. 😛 I dunno though, maybe she’ll try it out sometime.
Ah yes, sprints and accountability are very good. 😀
Ah, fair enough. It is busy. But at the rate I’m going at the moment, I have a week’s wiggle-room up my sleeve, which is nice. 😀
Sweeeeet. I love wiggle-room. And I hate pressure. Naturally.
What genre is your story?
Um, I don’t know what’d you call it. Speculative fiction, but that’s a very wide genre. It’s about some kid superheros (about 11-14 in ages at the beginning) who were implanted with technology in their brains to give them superhuman abilities (super-speed, flying, breathing underwater, things like that) and their fight against villains, great and…[Read more]
Definitely within the genre of speculative fiction. 😀 I don’t know what it would be called specifically either, but it sounds cool.
Yeah, it’s fun to write. It’s actually a rewrite of a previous series I did about 4-5 years ago called the Crimson Angel. It has the same characters, but I’ve added a few more as well.
Ah, rewrites. I know a little about those. From semi-personal experience, ya know. Amazing revamped second drafts and that sorta thing, at least, by the author my sister. 😛 They’re kinda fun. (Aside from all the old stuff that ends up getting cut that I loved. :'( At least it’s semi-made up for with awesome new material.)
And I bet the addition…[Read more]
Very fun. I’m taking several elements from the originals, and just making them better in the rewrites. It was mostly the plots that needed help. 😛
Those stodgy old plots. XD
I just finished the third book of the Mistborn trilogy, and if I wasn’t convinced enough before, it’s now undoubtedly proven: that guy’s strength is SO the plot. Good GRIEF. It’s very, very insane. I don’t know how anyone can think up such twists and un-cliche things. Amazing.
Sounds amazing. And inspiring, at least to a writer. There are only so many plots you can write when you’re rearranging the same 26 letters, and finding a way to twist the cliché is hard.
Yupper dupper.
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Have you ever tried writing, or is it definitely 100% not your thing? 😀