@perfectfifths
Active 7 years ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #22 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
Okay 😀
Well, I’ve rewritten the prologue so far. A few betas (I think Valtmy could have been one of them) suggested that the current prologue wasn’t really that important and it was told in a strange way (since it’s in third person when Sapph is one of the narrators anyway), so I redid it a bit different and am working the original…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #22 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice Hello!!! 😀 😀
It’s almost time for dinner, but I’m working on law school for a bit.
How’s SFI going? You’re still not going to put Rain and Kendall back together, are you? 😉 😛
*thinks of all my favorite parts and hopes you’ll keep them* 😉
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #22 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@valtmy @jenwriter17 @rochellaine
Anyone around at the moment? I’ve actually found some time to work on the third draft of SFI!
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Joy replied to the topic My book! (And yes I'm finally back!!) in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@photobloggergal YAAAAS ANOTHER WAYWARD KAPEEFER YEEEP
Anyway, welcome back!!! And congratulations! 😀 😀 😀
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #22 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
I always knew I’d make it as a time traveller one day. 😛
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #22 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice So now you are not simply a day in our future. Now you are in a completely different year! 😛
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #22 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@jenwriter17 Are you still here?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #22 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@catwing Hello! Are you ready for Christmas?
How’s your book coming along?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #22 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
We are finally fully moved into the new house, just in time for Christmas!
…actually, barely in time for Christmas… 😛
But I have a chance to settle down and relax, and work on my Christmas presents now. I just wanted to say hello and see if anyone was around to chat since I’ve been absent for a while and missed everyone…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #22 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
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Joy changed their profile picture 7 years, 4 months ago
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #22 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
You saw Phantom? As in, the movie or the actual stage version? I enjoy both, but the stage version is superior.
@seekjustice I saw the stage version. It was great!
My family has currently bamboozled themselves wondering whether you walk on the left side of the footpath or the right side.
Generally, we tend to walk on the right side since that’s…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #22 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
I’m back, if you’d like to chat 🙂
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #22 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
Are you still here? I’m around, storyboarding for Wattle Fire.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #22 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
My mother will be pleased to know the answer to that odd question.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #22 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
I’ve got a weird question for you Americans. In Australia, we usually walk on the same side of the footpath as we drive on the road, that being the right side. My family has currently bamboozled themselves wondering whether you walk on the left side of the footpath or the right side. 😛
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #22 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
Yeah, that’s what I was thinking. I’ve found that I enjoy very few books/movies with absent villains (and even ones like Lord of the Rings that have a largely absent villain in Sauron have very personal villains in Denethor, Gollum and Saruman).
I’m still scanning the archives of Puritan America, but for some reason I’m not thinking that…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #22 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
Well, the human antagonist is more a personification of the force of nature antagonist I had before. I thought that would help make it a bit more personal, rather than just a vague threatening presence.
Either would work. the villain is a surprise reveal sort of thing, so maybe an ironic name could work better.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #22 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
Not much at the moment. I’m currently just making an antagonist for Wattle Fire and trying to find a good old, suitably weird Puritan name
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