Louise Fowler

@jenwriter17 I’ll be sure to tag you. I will after all, need something after beta-readers for the finishing touches. 😀

@dekreel Nope. Never too late. 😀

@corissa-maiden-of-praise Worry not. I totally understand that. 🙂

@dekreel

No worries. They are curved so that they don’t drag on the ground or get in the road too much. They were used by cavalry officers, I believe.

I hadn’t even noticed the cranes (I’m looking at it on my phone and I practically need a magnifying glass). But they’re so cute!! I love them. *hugs all the tiny origami cranes*

@seekjustice  Sorry! I had no idea what a saber looked like. Google didn’t help at all XD

Thank you!!! I had fun 😀 (origami cranes are tricky to draw…)

@dekreel

I LOVE this! I love me too (for future reference though, sabress are slightly curved. They aren’t quite straight). I love how haughty Catwing looks too.

And Aberdeen is a very sophisticated dinosaur. 😁

@jenwriter17 I’m also terrible at coming up with titles!

I think it will be good! Don’t necessarily change what you have here, but give it your own special twist ;D

@jenwriter17  LOL

Actually the reason I like it is because there’s a character in Dr Who named Tegan. Different spelling, but still cool X)

@jenwriter17  It sounds fine! Just be sure there’s a bit of action. I love action 😉

Also I LOVE the name Taegan!!!

Yay! Thanks so much everyone! 😀

@itisastarrynight no worries!

(Also, I’m confused about your signature? What on earth does it mean?)

@jenwriter17 it sounds pretty good. the premise is a fairly common one, so maybe you could try twisting it in some way, adding a really good plot twist that the reader won’t see coming, such as making the villain less obvious, or making it one of the guardians themselves, or even her mentor. A few twists on this idea, I think, would make a really…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Google Docs is pretty simple. Clicking the link will take you to the first part of the novel, I’ll post the links for the second and third part in a minute. Above the doc there’ll be a bar which looks like the bar on this forum and towards the end there is an icon which has a little speech bubble with a plus sign. That’s the comment…[Read more]

@silverclaw-bonnetfolly @that_writer_girl_99 @jenwriter17

here’s the link for the google doc

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KNA78E-M5ltTfwNEFfpJeAuzlARhbMxAxsh5Vcb5UAY/edit?usp=sharing

if you’d prefer a word doc let me know and we can work something out. it should be set to commenting mode. 😀 It’s only the first ten chapters, because the…[Read more]

@sam-kowal no worries! Thanks, I really like the title too!

@silverclaw-bonnetfolly @that_writer_girl_99 @jenwriter17 three’s a perfect number! Are you right with a google doc or would you prefer Word?

@Rochellaine Sweet. If you want to check out my friend’s art, she has some of her work on Deviantart, which you could look at.

@rochellaine I’ve read the Lay of Aotrou and Itroun and the Lay of Sigrid and Gudrun (probably didn’t spell that right) but you might not like them as much if you haven’t read any of his novels, since these poems are a lot of his early inspiration. Still, if you like old mythology poetry you might like them.

Oh cool, I’m not very familiar with…[Read more]

Oh, @jane-maree see above.  I didn’t see your post until I had posted.

@mariposa Since they are for children’s books,  they can be simple or detailed, and I don’t really have a preference for black/white or color, except that color would probably sell better.  I don’t mind if the illustrations are a little cartoonish, though I like realistic better.  The biggest negative about cartoonish drawings is that I cannot st…[Read more]

@itisastarrynight

I’ve wrestled with this question too. For example, I wrote a story once (think Redwall ) with talking otters who acted like people, believed in God and could be saved etc. I didn’t have a problem with that because in this world they were people, with souls and free will. They weren’t animals anymore. They just alagorically…[Read more]