Louise Fowler

Thanks @sage-g!

@catwing

Also, it might be helpful if you have the characters squinting with both the top and bottom eyelids. I’m reading a tutorial on how to rig using a certain method that’s supposed to simplify the process (kind of), and the example model he’s using has its eyes squinting. And examining the process, it makes a lot of sense.

@skredder

Bye!

I need to leave for a bit too, but I’ll be back soon

😀 I hope it goes well!

@jenwriter17

3 povs would be fine if they all are important and vital and each of them are engaging. I’m reading Cress by Marissa Meyer and it has way more than 3 but it works really well and they all tie together neatly

@jenwriter17  I agree with Skredder. Also, when you’re transitioning from one to the other, make it clear who they are and where they are (and who they aren’t and where they aren’t)

Okay, so the smile works LOL

Ignore me — I’m just recycling a fairly old topic and seeing if I can make emojis out of colon commands…..

:heart:  :european_castle:  :black_nib:  🙂

@skredder

That sounds like a pretty cool story!

@skredder

Yep! What are you working on?

Sounds good! @seekjustice

@dragon-snapper

Goodbye!

@dragon-snapper

Sorry, I only just saw the last bit of your post.

I’ve read the first two chapters so far, but I’m hoping to get a bit of time and read it by the end of the month!

@seekjustice Thanks. 😀 I’m going to sign out now. It’s getting a bit late where I am. Thanks for writing with me! And I hope your plotting goes well.