Louise Fowler

@winter-rose Yeah! I need some to. I’m testing a new writing app, so I might not respond immediately, every five minutes or so. 😀 What are you working on?

@clairec  You’re welcome! As a manga artist, this was a challenge. But I enjoyed it 🙂

@skredder  @jenwriter17  @sam-kowal  @supermonkey42

Wait, hang on, this isn’t what I meant, actually. You know in the Writers Corner, you sign in when you’re currently writing and chat with others? That’s what this is. You sign in, talk about what you’re currently reading at that moment, talk about life, etc.

Sorry!

@rochellaine

Its fun, isn’t it? I like talking in an Irish accent 🙂

Funnily enough, only one main character (and the antagonist) die.

@jenwriter17

Oppressive governments aren’t necessarily a cliche, they’re actually a requirement (or less, a complete lack of government), some cliches though would be:

MC is “different” (Divergent, maybe? ;P)

Rebellions ALWAYS work

Communist or Socialist governments. Any type of government can go wrong, so you could try exploring something…[Read more]

@dekreel, Thank you! She looks great. 🙂

@clairec

@that_writer_girl_99

@supermonkey42 That’s a cool book.  How far are you in it? (I’ve never actually read it, but I know the story pretty well.)

@dekreel I think that’s a great idea! I don’t read nearly enough either.

I’ve never read Richard III.  The only thing I know from that is “My kingdom for a horse!” (At least, I think it’s from that one.)  I’ve read a lot of other Shakespeare, though.  Have you read any of his other plays?

Okay, here is a somewhat updated version of my story with another bit as long as the first tacked on at the end. The second half is a little more story and less ramble.  I tried to fix a couple of parts some of you mentioned, such as more description, and a little bit of dialogue, and I’d like to know how you think this new version turned out.  A…[Read more]

@skredder  Makes sense. I’ll see if I can make it more clear 🙂

@skredder  Haha, thanks! I’m glad you liked it!

Do you think you could tell me (or show me) where you were confused about who was talking? Feel free to point them out in comments and I’ll change them! Or just tell me here X)

@rochellaine  Hehe, IKR. I like Kirk, but I hate how romantic he is.

Like, DUDE, CAN’T YOU JUST STICK TO ONE GIRL AND CUT IT OUT?!?!

@dekreel Well, it’s not really an actual game.  I was joking when I asked if you could play it.  🙂 But some fans play it.  Here is the Wikipedia article about it.

My favorite TOS episode…um…I can’t really pick one.  I do love how cute Kirk is in the end of The Trouble with Tribbles.  He just looks so exhausted he doesn’t even put up a fight…[Read more]

@aislinn-mollisong  Wait so Nikko reminds you? X)

You know you’re a writer when you drop writing terms into conversation like “character arcs” and “themes,” and everyone looks at you like, “Wha…??”

@rochellaine  OHHH that’s right! I love that part! 😀 😀

I didn’t know that was an actual game though O-O

What is your favorite TOS episode? My two favorites are Piece of the Action and The Trouble with Tribbles

@dekreel In explanation: Fizbin is the crazy card game Kirk made up to distract the guards when he and Spock were locked up in A Piece of the Action.  He distracted them with making up confusing rules and then knocked the cards off the table so that the guard would pick them up.  That way he could knock the guard over the head and they could get a…[Read more]

Hey guys! So I’m going to reuse an OLD thread and post my updated story snippet for you guys to critique. To make it clear, this is my Doctor Who fan novella. You don’t have to be a Whovian to read it. I’m excited about it because I recently started changing it to first person instead of third. Here is what I have so far!

@theacornman  @pickupyour…[Read more]