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Active 7 years, 5 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Self-Doubt… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
Hey. Look. I’m not going to say you’re an amazing writer, but I am going to say that if you like writing and if it’s something you enjoy then it’s a gift. It’s a gift from God.
He’s blessed you with that gift and you don’t have to be a higher standard, a better writer, as good as ‘so-and-so’, because He’s given you the gift in exactly…[Read more]
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Joy started the topic Self-Doubt… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
Heya, Kapeefers. Early warning: this is kind of a deep post
I need some help… Lately I have been seriously self-doubting myself and my ability to write, and comparing myself to other writers.
I write because I love story-telling, not because I want to be published (although that would be kinda cool). I just want to write stories. And I don’t…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 6 months ago
@aislinn-mollisong YES I WANT TO DRAW EMBER! WOOHOO!
Ahem, sorry. *sheepish grin* I’d like to give it a shot 😀
Ohh, unless you want Ari to do it…
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Joy replied to the topic An idea in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus Ahhh, Oops, my bad X’D
Well, it’s still a good idea XD
@supermonkey42 I’m impressed by you going through all of the archives! Do you read every single post?
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Joy replied to the topic Review my (old) story's prologue in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 6 months ago
@valtmy Sure! Mind putting it in record/suggest/comment mode for us? 🙂
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Joy replied to the topic An idea in the forum Questions and Support 8 years, 6 months ago
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@supermonkey42 Bye! Thanks for joining me!
Anyone else still here?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@supermonkey42 Changing from third person to first person in the middle of a story is not the same as changing the name of one of your characters. That means MAJOR editing work! 😀 You’ve seriously done that?
I have written from several secondary male characters POVs, but never had one as the main character yet. I’m going to have to learn how…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@supermonkey I guess you could call it semi-dystopian? Or just simply futuristic?
First person or third person? Is your protagonist a boy or a girl? 😀 I like asking questions.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@jenwriter17 I hope so! 🙂 But I’m never sure.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@supermonkey42 I wrote a book like that once. It was supposed to be a time travel story, but focusing on the different cultures of the time periods, rather than the science of time travel. The time travel element ended up taking over the book more than I intended…so it’s technically sci-fi now. 😀 But I set the contemporary parts in 202…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@supermonkey42 Cool! What genre?
I’m doing a his-fic short story I’ve had started for a while, but got discouraged from when I lost about a thousand words. I was listening to a song today that reminded me of it, so I decided to try again. 🙂
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
Hellooooo…I’m writing! Anyone around?
@seekjustice @dekreel @supermonkey42 @jenwriter17 @anyone-else
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Rochellaine posted an update 8 years, 6 months ago
@seekjustice Hey! How are you? I haven’t seen you around in a while. You going to be around sometime soon?
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus Yay! *lemonade and cheesecake for all*
I definitely prefer “Awestruck to see that in dark the lights dance”.
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Joy replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 6 months ago
@ethryndal Have you done mine yet?
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Rochellaine posted an update 8 years, 6 months ago
@salome01w4g Oh my goodness! *embarrassed* I just realized that when you said “PM” you with the poem you meant “public message.” I am so not used to internet language. I’m so sorry!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 7 months ago
Here’s Hannah’s post:
And now I present you: Potato Squash Pudding. (I also present you my shame and the disgrace of all my authoress dignity. 😬😂)
Potatoes and Squash, a farmer’s delight
A field he grew and harvested in plenty
And without a clue to his plight!
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Snapper replied to the topic Just a Bit… Dismal in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus Thankee. *bows* Well, I tried incorporating small ‘good’ things and it’s been a lot let dismal lately. I think I just let Ike gnaw on dismal’ness’ for too long. XD
@sarah-anson I really like the italicized bit you said there. *nods* I agree. Thanks!
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
‘Most comely he smiled’ is better
And little Teedletiden he fashioned for the trees
For all of these a city, Letharill, he made
Its glory was established that it should never fade[ I’m unsure about the meter in these last three lines, especially lines 1 and 3.]Maybe instead: ‘And little Teedletiden he fashioned for trees
For all t…[Read more]
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Aw that’s so sweet! Thanks for noticing I haven’t been on much, I’ve been too busy for much writting this past week, but I’m hoping that I’ll have some time to catch up on KP and all my projects next week 😁