@perfectfifths
Active 7 years, 5 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
- Total Posts: 726
-
Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Yes, I think so too. I’ll either have to find a way to make the story work with out that scene, or have Chara watching or something, so she can describe it, or else just find a few more scenes that I can do from Derek’s perspective.
I think I might be able to have that scene from Chara’s POV if she’s watching it happen or listening…[Read more]
-
SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Yeah, I did. But I think it worked okay, and like you said, it wasn’t for long.
And that would be a bit weird. So either you’d have to leave that scene out or put some more scenes in his pov beforehand.
-
Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice And yet you used Zac’s POV in When Infinity is Empty which made it three. 😉 But that was only for a few pages. And it was pretty necessary.
I’ll consider it. Most of the scenes I have planned will very much not work with any POV but Chara’s. I thought if I did a second it would probably be Raelyn for a few scenes, but I just…[Read more]
-
SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
I used to write books with heaps of povs as well, but lately I’ve had to limit myself to about two, because otherwise I get overwhelmed. Two’s my favourite though, enough variation without being overwhelming. I think you could try doing some scenes from Derek’s pov, but it would be completely fine if you just did it exclusively with…[Read more]
-
Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Hm, I guess you’re right. Besides, she’d probably love to have something in common with Derek, huh? 😛
It was an empty threat anyway, since I don’t intend on using Derek’s POV except as a last resort. All the scenes I have planned work best from Chara’s POV, and I’m trying to experiment with using only one, since I usually have s…[Read more]
-
SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Definitely 🙂
It depends…some characters are so self-centred they want all the povs, some don’t. I feel like Chara wouldn’t mind. In fact, I think she’d be more than happy to share with Derek.
-
Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Yes, I’m sure it’ll take me a while, too. I’ve done lots of kinds of writing, but this is different from all of them. 😛
Ohh, no. Not fun. I have no idea what’s going on inside Chara’s head right now, and she’s not letting me see it. Think if I threaten to switch to Derek’s POV she might behave? 😛
-
SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
It took me quite a while to really immerse myself in the style of blogging as well, its kind of different to other kinds of writing.
😛 Have fun with that!
-
Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Since I’ve only written about three blog posts, I’m still having quite a bit of trouble figuring out the style of that. 😉
I’m opening my western now to see if my characters remember me or if I’ll have to introduce myself to them all over again. I’ll let you know how that goes.
-
SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Awesome! Do I dare ask how its going?
-
Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Hi, I’m here! Possibly working on a blog post, possibly working on my western. 🙂 Neither of which has been touched in weeks. 😛
-
SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
-
Emily D posted an update 8 years, 2 months ago
@dragon-snapper @perfectfifths @dekreel @jenwriter17 @ingridrd @rolena-hatfield @livgiordano @mariposa @clairec @jayniecatgirl08
Hello girls!
I’m SO SORRY…
I haven’t been on here in like FOREVER. Please forgive me. I wanted to let you know that I’ll be moving…just next door to Story Embers. Hope to see yas over there!
-
SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
No that’s fine! I just posted it because Rochellaine wanted to read it. I won’t be looking for beta readers until its done, and you’re welcome to read it then. Of course, if you don’t want to read it again, you don’t have to 😉
-
Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@dekreel Hey, Dekreel!! I see you on SeekJustice’s document. I feel like I barely know you anymore, you’re never around! Are you on right now?
-
SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Oh, I forgot that Jen was away anyway 😛
-
SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
By the way everyone, I would love to stay and chat today but I’m going out with my family and I’m not sure how long I’ll be gone for. Probably I won’t be around today 🙁
May your writing prosper in tue absence of the queen.
@rochellaine @jenwriter17 @valtmy and everyone else.
-
SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
Awww, thank you 🙂 You’re so sweet and encouraging.
Well, I guess for me, writing romance is no different to writing a psychopath like Theresa Caelan. It just requires a lot of imagination. And while I don’t really like reading romance, I may have a soft spot for writing it. Particularly Sapphire and Quillon. They warm my cold, hard heart 😉
-
Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Like I commented on the doc, I love it!! It works perfectly as a stand-alone piece, and I think everyone who reads it will love it too.
…unless they’re a thirteen-year-old kid who thinks romance is “mush” even when it’s simple and sweet. 😛
I’m amazed at how often you say you hate romance when you write it so well! 😉 I guess y…[Read more]
-
SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine Great!
- Load More

Hello, Emily!
I feel like the KP forum has been winding down a lot since Story Embers started. I know I haven’t been very active on it for some time.
Hey Louise! Thanks for understanding 🙂
Also, do you know if the other Emily is still here? I wanted to tag her before but couldn’t work out which one she was…there are certainly a lot of Emily’s here now! 🙂
I actually haven’t been on Story Embers very much though. I don’t quite understand why this site was put on hiatus while another, very similar site was started up.
Also, I’m not sure which other Emily you mean?
@perfectfifths Not quite sure what her real surname is…I don’t think that she has an account anymore.
How are you, anyway? 🙂
I can’t think of any other Emilys, so unless you mean Emma? I don’t know who you’re looking for, sorry.
I’m good. Just going about my life. 🙂 Writing, music, things like that. How are you?
@emily-d Hi! That’s totally fine 😉 I’m on the SE forums but not that much; mostly I’m staying on KP. 🙂
Hi Jen! Thanks…glad to be getting back into my writing groove haha. 😉
@perfectfifths That’s fine. I’m great, thanks… me too. What instrument do you play? I play piano and I’m learning ukelele 🙂
@emily-d
I play violin, am teaching myself recorder and I kind of play viola and cello. But violin is the only instrument I’ve learned “properly” (had lessons and stuff).
@perfectfifths Hi Louise, so sorry I didn’t reply sooner, I haven’t been on here for forever! Sounds like fun. 🙂 I want to learn harp and violin 🙂
@emily-d
Genuinely surprised to get a KP notification XD
Violin is great. Harp is really nice too (though I’ve never touched one, so I don’t know how difficult it is 😉 ).
@perfectfifths Yay! (sorry this is so late)
@jenwriter17
Are either of you on SE now?
@emily-d I am, under the same name 🙂
@emily-d
No, not really. I get their emails and stuff but I don’t really use the forums.