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Active 6 years ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic 2nd person mystery? in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 5 months ago
@daeus It sounds really interesting. The only experience I have with second-person is Choose Your Own Adventure stories.
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Cover Feedback in the forum Publishing & Platform 7 years, 5 months ago
@daeus I really like it, I don’t think it necessarily needs anything else. But if you really want something, the thing that comes to mind when you something ominous is (having read some of your story) the image of the goddess the main character keeps thinking of. Though I’m not sure where, or if it would be too in-your-face if you did that.
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Testing in the forum Questions and Support 7 years, 5 months ago
Hmm… nope, still confused. 😛
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Testing in the forum Questions and Support 7 years, 5 months ago
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Testing in the forum Questions and Support 7 years, 5 months ago
@emily Possibly. But I don’t even really know what the other buttons do. 😛
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Testing in the forum Questions and Support 7 years, 5 months ago
@emily Really wants to mess with the last five green buttons XD
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Testing in the forum Questions and Support 7 years, 5 months ago
I don’t know about the rest of you, but this whole page is showin’ up weird on my screen. 😛
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Louise Fowler posted a new activity comment 7 years, 5 months ago
@emma-flournoy I think Mistborn is in my to-read shelf on Goodreads…
Yes, I kinda had an idea that it’s not a warm-and-fuzzy animal book, and, to be honest, I’m only reading it because it is short, and I’m trying to finish my Goodreads reading challenge I set for myself – not that I don’t have enough breathing room as it is. XD But I’m only two…[Read more]
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Louise Fowler posted a new activity comment 7 years, 5 months ago
So, what are you reading now? I’m still in Boxen, but I’m nearly finished, and after that I’m going to read Animal Farm (I know nothing about it – do you know if it’s any good?)
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@daeus Oh! Cool. 🙂
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@daeus Great! And I hope you realise it’s in edit mode rather than suggest mode. I’ll try to just make comments, but suggest mode is really helpful for making edits that you can later accept or reject.
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Louise Fowler posted a new activity comment 7 years, 6 months ago
I don’t what it was about it, but that was the real deal-breaker for me.
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Louise Fowler posted a new activity comment 7 years, 6 months ago
@emma-flournoy *thinking I’d already replied to this* Yeah, I’d seen a little bit of the mini-series and liked the look of it.
You know what really got me in Perelandra? When he started calling Weston the Un-man. *shudders*
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@daeus I clicked the link and all that, will the doc be in my email or something? 🙂
@salome01w4g Be that as it may, you have to get through the creepy stuff to get to the good ending. 😉 I’m sure I’ll go back to it sometime. 😀
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@daeus All right. Keep in mind I recently had to stop reading Perelandra from Lewis’ space trilogy because it got too creepy, but that doesn’t usually happen for me. But I’m learning to stop reading if I can’t handle it, so just fair warning. 😛
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@daeus Hmm… I might be able to do it (I find I often underestimate how quick I can do these things). I’d just like to ask about content, if there’s possibly anything some people might not be comfortable with?
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 6 months ago
@daeus 8,900 words? Do you have a deadline?
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Three and Seven ~ Finding Secrets in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 6 months ago
@catwing So it looks like @jess-penrose and I are swapping. 🙂
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Three and Seven ~ Finding Secrets in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 6 months ago
@catwing That sounds good. I plan on doing NaNo as well, but 59,000 words doesn’t sound like it’d take too long. *thinking, thinking…*
You know what, to be on the safe side, put me in with the second group for after November. 🙂 Our school holidays start mid-December and finish late in January, so that would give me plenty of time. 🙂
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Well two books away ain’t bad at all. Especially if one of them is Animal Farm, of course. 😀
Yep. And I’m finding it interesting, if not enjoying it. Definitely worth the read though.
Great.
I just finished Animal Farm last night. It was depressing, and disgusting, but still worth the read. I could tell exactly what was going on the whole time, but the animals were painfully unaware. And in the end, they were no better off than when they started, if not worse!
I KNOW. It’s so painful. *ascends soapbox and yells at the world* COMMUNISM IS HORRID FOR EVERYONE!
What’s ironic is, George Orwell was something of a socialist himself, though not Communist level. Maybe he didn’t realize the hypocrisy in writing something like that, or just didn’t see it the same way. But it’s quite sad.
Maybe he believed in the ideals, but only saw the corruption, so was sending a message to fellow socialists? I don’t know much about all the isms. 😛
Suffice it to say, all the isms are mucho flawed.
I figured that much. 😛
Are you participating in NaNo, or are you the one that doesn’t write? (I keep forgetting 😛 ).
Yup, that’s me. So no, instead I get to sit around and congratulate myself that I’m just a bibliophile and not a writer, and so need not go through the pain of NaNo. XD
*shudder* Seriously, it sounds like a ton o’ work. Are you doing it? Have you done it before?
All right, is Kate participating in NaNo? 😛
Yes I am, yes I have, and yes it is a lot of work, but this year I’m using it as the way to start writing consistently again.One of my good friends is helping me by doing word sprints with me every day and keeping me on track. 😛
No…I don’t know if she’s ever considered it seriously, but I don’t think it’d fit very well with our schedule anyway. We have a cabin rental business which we handle as a family, so I don’t know if the busyness of NaNo would work out quite right. 😛 I dunno though, maybe she’ll try it out sometime.
Ah yes, sprints and accountability are very good. 😀
Ah, fair enough. It is busy. But at the rate I’m going at the moment, I have a week’s wiggle-room up my sleeve, which is nice. 😀
Sweeeeet. I love wiggle-room. And I hate pressure. Naturally.
What genre is your story?
Um, I don’t know what’d you call it. Speculative fiction, but that’s a very wide genre. It’s about some kid superheros (about 11-14 in ages at the beginning) who were implanted with technology in their brains to give them superhuman abilities (super-speed, flying, breathing underwater, things like that) and their fight against villains, great and…[Read more]
Definitely within the genre of speculative fiction. 😀 I don’t know what it would be called specifically either, but it sounds cool.
Yeah, it’s fun to write. It’s actually a rewrite of a previous series I did about 4-5 years ago called the Crimson Angel. It has the same characters, but I’ve added a few more as well.
Ah, rewrites. I know a little about those. From semi-personal experience, ya know. Amazing revamped second drafts and that sorta thing, at least, by the author my sister. 😛 They’re kinda fun. (Aside from all the old stuff that ends up getting cut that I loved. :'( At least it’s semi-made up for with awesome new material.)
And I bet the addition…[Read more]
Very fun. I’m taking several elements from the originals, and just making them better in the rewrites. It was mostly the plots that needed help. 😛
Those stodgy old plots. XD
I just finished the third book of the Mistborn trilogy, and if I wasn’t convinced enough before, it’s now undoubtedly proven: that guy’s strength is SO the plot. Good GRIEF. It’s very, very insane. I don’t know how anyone can think up such twists and un-cliche things. Amazing.
Sounds amazing. And inspiring, at least to a writer. There are only so many plots you can write when you’re rearranging the same 26 letters, and finding a way to twist the cliché is hard.
Yupper dupper.
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Have you ever tried writing, or is it definitely 100% not your thing? 😀