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However…the Light One (God) is always watching over Ara and her friends…

As well as His Guardians (Type and shadow of angels)

in fact I MIGHT (not sure) have the gang meet some or a guardian along their journey.

Maybe even the Guardian that Ara considers like a brother, named Ganesh.

No matter what, Ara and her friends are destined to…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium good question!
So essentially what happens is this (and I haven’t figured out ALL of the details)- Eder (type and shadows of Satan) is headed to A’Grend, to destroy it. Ara, sorta begrudgingly, tries to find out how to stop him, being led by her dreams/visions and a journal by her late grandmother.

She discovers her gra…[Read more]

@whalekeeper true, true (love having a brainstorm partner lol)

So…in this book, Ara is still struggling with past mistakes/decisions. She’s grown a lot since the first book (this is a series so there is growth in each book, wether it be good or bad growth) but nothing is fully gone yet. Now, though, she’s struggling mostly with the fact that…[Read more]

@whalekeeper oooh I like that! However…I like to think a lot of my charries fall under both umbrellas. Many of them are trying to survive the evil that’s been done to them, but they’re also having to overcome their own inner demons, sometimes heightened, or because of the evil that’s been done to them, make sense?

Where do those charact…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

YES. I. AM.

But only for his own protection, so it’s a good thing, right? Of course right.

@freedomwriter76

Thank You!!! It’s an experiment. 😉

Is there anything you liked/thoughts/suggestions?

And yes, I think she is turning to kidnapping. XD

@koshka

Awww, thank you! For reading! My crazy opening! And liking it!

I’m glad you think so. Although I think there are some snotty Alwin chapters ahead. *Wry laugh*

Yes of course. That dreaded next chapter. Don’t worry, it will get worse. 😁😅

@hybridlore

Thank you! That means so much. I’m still trying to figure out my writing voice – or at…[Read more]

OH AND MUSIC!!! Totally write down your favorite song or songs that make you think of whatever you’re creating! Honestly anything that inspires you about what you’re making-quotes, scriptures, music, pictures, unique words, etc.

@thesrcaneaxiom I LOVE THIS!!!! As a person who really loves templates, using templates (and then throwing them out and using new ones, and then repeating the process, creating my own, etc XD) this is so true!

I do love getting all of the basics down, and the more…technical aspects of it all down, where I can look at it and remember it all, or c…[Read more]

@whalekeeper ooh love those points!! I don’t have a blurb currently (I probably have old blurbs stored away on my computer, but the story has changed so much they probably aren’t quite as relevant? Though most of it remains the same.)

Essentially this is what happens-

This takes place a few weeks (or a month or so) after the events of the…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yw! It makes me so glad you feel comfortable sharing with me!! 💖💖

My first night without my sis was really hard too, I had a fear of the dark that really was helped by sharing a room with her (might have woken her up on occasion because of that 😂) so I was super stressed about it. Turns out it faded with time and I got…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I am so happy you like them!! ❤ That means a lot to me, because I remember at some point you critiqued my writing, and I was a little self-conscious about the whole thing. So I decided to do better. Thank you for that little push, Min! (And if you have more advice relating to my writing, do not hesitate to wound my pride.)

Lol sorry…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

AHHHH, beautiful! Symbolic! Lovely! Suspenseful!

Alwin and William are so heartachally adorable. (Especially with you know what in the first chapter. *Glares at evil guard* *quietly stuffs Alwin in secret closet*)

@whalekeeper

Dude your writing is just so unique, like the whole image of Marcel and Seb is so clear in my mind 😂 I can’t get enough of your descriptions lol

@godlyfantasy12

Uh Idk about Finn, (doesn’t freedom have a finn?) I have a Flax somewhere in there but he got kinda lost with the chaos 😅

@hybridlore

I really like what you have so far! If I were to include anything else, I would be sure to show what her emotional reaction is to the information in the beginning, so it’s obvious what kind of growth she has gone through. I feel like most people would have one or more of the five stages of grief (denial, anger, bargaining, depression…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium (your were)

Thanks!! This is my second (third?) Try at the opening.

@koshka @sunny421 @freedomwriter @godlyfanrasy @joycalle …iforgotyourtag @Idon’tknowwhototag

Hi everyone! I know I’ve been floating about in shadowy silence, so I’m sorry if I haven’t commented on some of y’all’s excellent work. Maybe I’ll be able to go back and give some thoughts as I’ve really enjoyed reading them.

Anyway, now that long and…[Read more]