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@ellette-giselle

I really like the imprisoned ones. And the orphaned kiddos. XD

I noticed you don’t seem to keep to specific face structures for characters, especially Amelia’s nose? It made her a little difficult to pick out without looking at subtitles.

As for other scenes I might have liked to see…maybe right before their interrupted…[Read more]

@whalekeeper @loopylin Benny is a fun character! Did Lois draw him?

Viktor (Library)

“Yes, kind of new. This year is my first.” He sat down in his chair again. The upholstery was still warm from where he’d curled up in it earlier. He settled back into the cozy spot.

The Hugo boy looked like he had attended the school much longer, or at least he…[Read more]

@loopylin Ack! I did see it, but Sir Gawain was having my Brot Lit homework in my face, and Robert Burns almost burnt the sticky toffee pudding. I have returned now though, since I have some Quiz stuff to put off doing for another hour.

@whalekeeper Mm hmm. 👀 This does actually happen in the story, but she can’t hit him then because he’s feverish…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

First off, those two memes are painfully hilarious. XD Thank you for blessing this place with them. XD

Now.

That’s some cool concept imagery. 😎

Yay! My quirky mental imagery has been deeply complemented. XD

I want them to be like the Silent Warriors in Aerethtrae, but more mystical. If that makes sense. XD Like Tolkien’s Valar or d…[Read more]

Reúven & Liora (School Grounds)

It was almost dark as night before the school lit their way with it’s enthusiasm for lights. Liora followed Reúven up the front steps a little closer than she would have normally.

“You know, we would have been in so much trouble if we were out after dark a few years ago.”

“A few years ago?” He held the door o…[Read more]

@hybridlore @whalekeeper

I’m here, although we’re about to have breakfast, so I’ll be back …XD

@whalekeeper

*Pops out of nowhere*

By the way, I don’t know your friend, but I’m gonna guess she would love your questions. We usually like sharing, even if we’re shy about it sometimes. And if your bestie doesn’t know exactly, getting your questions may be a great place for her to find the “why” for herself.

Or you can ask on here like you…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

It’s okay! I’ll actually be really busy tomorrow as well. (Homework+ Burn’s Night preparations)

@whalekeeper @loopylin

Aha!

By the way, Loopy, I’m not strong either, but I’m too stubborn to get a cart for bags of dogfood. You can do it, Loopy. Be stubborn!!!

Viktor (Library)one of these days I’m going to use his actual name and not catch it. And there will be confusion. 😬

“What?” Viktor rose too quickly and smacked his head on the side…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Awesome job. I’m so sorry Riker sometimes. Like seriously. *Sniffles*

@savannah_grace2009

I’m game!

@savannah_grace2009

I’ll join in too if that’s okay. =) My family is having a thing at our house tomorrow though, so I might not be able to stay long.

@koshka I will say however, with quotes, I’ve read the entire book of Peter Pan by J.M. Barrie and use quotes from that book for inspiration (and probably in my actual book)

I also read the other Peter Pan book Barrie wrote (Basically a prequel to Peter Pan) but…I don’t really suggest or recommend it because it was quite weird and a little…[Read more]

@koshka afraid I don’t have any incorrect quotes for this WIP, as it was years ago and I hadn’t even done incorrect quotes at the time XD (when did I start this book…idk…XD)

The year I’m not sure…it doesn’t take place in our world, so not any of our years…

The first book only spans across at least maybe a few months. The whole series (of…[Read more]

@hybridlore @ellete-giselle I haven’t read it but I did start it! Can’t remember if I still have it or not cuz I had culled my bookshelves a while back…XD

@godlyfantasy12

Ah! I love it. Here’s a few questions:

1) what time of year does the book start/span?

2) what type of things does Peter’s father invent?

3) have you made incorrect quotes for these charies yet?

@keilah0h popping on to say IT’S PRONOUNCED KAY-LUH….

*Insert embarrassed emoji….ducks back underground muttering to self. Falls and bangs into ground*

This was the logline I’d wrote for it too!

A Peter Pan retelling in a steampunk YA setting, about a boy who must learn that life is worth living despite the battles.

Of course, as my books always do, there’s a theme that deals with inner/mental struggles and battles. I have my own mental struggles and family members/friends who have the same,…[Read more]

ANYWAY!

Here is was my (I think? XD) Newest Blurb or at least one of the newest blurbs when I left this WIP

When Peter Barrie’s homeland, Everlin is taken over by a ruthless dictator, his life is turned upside down. When his parents are taken captive by the dictator, due to their father being an inventor, Peter and his little sister, Bell, are t…

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@loopylin NOT YOU TOO!!! NO…STOP!!! MY BRAIN CAN’T BRAIN THIS….