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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Leo
“Ah, sixteen. I was twelve when I was apprenticed to…to my mentor, but you’re not too old. None of the creeps ever came down to the basement, and if they do try it, it’s not like they’re nothing we can’t handle. Besides,” a grin broke out on his face. “It’ll give me an excuse to wear my suit to work.” Memories…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Leo
He sighed and glanced down at his mug. Empty.
“The school is certainly… complicated. How about we just…” His gaze drifted from Barnes to Rory. Bruises, cuts, scuffs. Rory seemed to be favoring one knee. Barnes, her arm. Leo traced the pattern on the side of his mug.
Yes, Rory could fight. Barnes could too…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
BWAHAHHAHAHA! Off to the dragons with you post eating, gate keeping ghost. You are vanquished!!
*Ahem*
I uh…found myself with a few minutes of down time and decided to try logging in again and again to see if I got through.
*Glances around* *shuffles feet*
I’d better go now, but I’ll try to RP after church…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Aw. (I forgot everyone can use Ink) That’s really cute. I would have been so happy if some of my childhood doodles came to life like that.Â
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Koshka replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
*Incoherent squealing*
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Koshka replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
I really like the imprisoned ones. And the orphaned kiddos. XD
I noticed you don’t seem to keep to specific face structures for characters, especially Amelia’s nose? It made her a little difficult to pick out without looking at subtitles.
As for other scenes I might have liked to see…maybe right before their interrupted…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@whalekeeper @loopylin Benny is a fun character! Did Lois draw him?
Viktor (Library)
“Yes, kind of new. This year is my first.” He sat down in his chair again. The upholstery was still warm from where he’d curled up in it earlier. He settled back into the cozy spot.
The Hugo boy looked like he had attended the school much longer, or at least he…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@loopylin Ack! I did see it, but Sir Gawain was having my Brot Lit homework in my face, and Robert Burns almost burnt the sticky toffee pudding. I have returned now though, since I have some Quiz stuff to put off doing for another hour.
@whalekeeper Mm hmm. 👀 This does actually happen in the story, but she can’t hit him then because he’s feverish…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
First off, those two memes are painfully hilarious. XD Thank you for blessing this place with them. XD
Now.
That’s some cool concept imagery. 😎
Yay! My quirky mental imagery has been deeply complemented. XD
I want them to be like the Silent Warriors in Aerethtrae, but more mystical. If that makes sense. XD Like Tolkien’s Valar or d…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Reúven & Liora (School Grounds)
It was almost dark as night before the school lit their way with it’s enthusiasm for lights. Liora followed Reúven up the front steps a little closer than she would have normally.
“You know, we would have been in so much trouble if we were out after dark a few years ago.”
“A few years ago?” He held the door o…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I’m here, although we’re about to have breakfast, so I’ll be back …XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
*Pops out of nowhere*
By the way, I don’t know your friend, but I’m gonna guess she would love your questions. We usually like sharing, even if we’re shy about it sometimes. And if your bestie doesn’t know exactly, getting your questions may be a great place for her to find the “why” for herself.
Or you can ask on here like you…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
It’s okay! I’ll actually be really busy tomorrow as well. (Homework+ Burn’s Night preparations)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Aha!
By the way, Loopy, I’m not strong either, but I’m too stubborn to get a cart for bags of dogfood. You can do it, Loopy. Be stubborn!!!
Viktor (Library)
one of these days I’m going to use his actual name and not catch it. And there will be confusion. 😬“What?” Viktor rose too quickly and smacked his head on the side…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
Awesome job. I’m so sorry Riker sometimes. Like seriously. *Sniffles*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I’m game!
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Koshka replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I’ll join in too if that’s okay. =) My family is having a thing at our house tomorrow though, so I might not be able to stay long.
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic My New/Old WIP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@koshka I will say however, with quotes, I’ve read the entire book of Peter Pan by J.M. Barrie and use quotes from that book for inspiration (and probably in my actual book)
I also read the other Peter Pan book Barrie wrote (Basically a prequel to Peter Pan) but…I don’t really suggest or recommend it because it was quite weird and a little…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic My New/Old WIP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@koshka afraid I don’t have any incorrect quotes for this WIP, as it was years ago and I hadn’t even done incorrect quotes at the time XD (when did I start this book…idk…XD)
The year I’m not sure…it doesn’t take place in our world, so not any of our years…
The first book only spans across at least maybe a few months. The whole series (of…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic My New/Old WIP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
@hybridlore @ellete-giselle I haven’t read it but I did start it! Can’t remember if I still have it or not cuz I had culled my bookshelves a while back…XD
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